WIP - Bioshock fanart looking for feedback

[Scubasteve]

I really like the lines! Yeah, not feeling the colors either. I'm thinking the little sister is too bright. I see what your trying to do, but the green is too bright given the rest of the image IMO. Maybe you could tone it down a bit and get it to work. Do they have pupils? I think if you took out the little sisters pupils it might work better.. I dunno though. I also am not feeling the drill. The far edges are too flat, seems like it should be more round to me. Not a big deal. I think your close. Maybe experiment with those colors a bit. Try some darker, more realistic colors over all. That might be cool.

[MasterPete]

Thanks for the comment! Wil try to fix the colour on the little sister. It's been bugging me all these time. And the drill, as soon as you mention it, I can see the flatness. Nice spot.

Thanks again. Will post updated version soon :)

[MasterPete]

http://www.oneartcentre.com/misc/bioshock_hero2.jpg

Hopefully this looks better. I turn the green off and the little sister blend better :)

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