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Hi! This will be the titlescreen of our 3D short kong&bird.
I'm working on it right now. I need quick help cause I have
to finish the painting today. Please give me feedback!
Thnx
http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_01.jpg
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Here is the a update.
I added more details in the left area.
http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_02.jpg
man, looks great. i love the colors. sharpen out the whole thing add details and your good to go. :thumbsup:
The tree branch coming out of the top left corner seems a liitle flat
It could use a little definition.
Is this the background for the title?
It would be nice to see it in context with the title?
We can probably give you a better critique that way.
Looking good.
Xoveky
07-27-2003, 10:48 PM
it is a very good paint :applause:
maybe can u make more details
more details on tree
some athmospheric lights fx in the background
thnx for your feedback. But unfortunally I'm already finished. Here are two pictures of the final version and the composite as divx503.avi.
C&C please. Cause when I have enough time I can still edit the intro.
intro_divx503_975KB (http://www.area-56.de/animations/tests/intro_divx503.avi)
http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_03.jpg
http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_04.jpg
Xoveky
07-28-2003, 10:05 AM
i think it's good
nothing to criticz
:thumbsup:
But i think some more detail added to the leaves and branches would be nicer. :) Composition is great! :beer:
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