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Goro
07-27-2003, 12:13 PM
Hi! This will be the titlescreen of our 3D short kong&bird.
I'm working on it right now. I need quick help cause I have
to finish the painting today. Please give me feedback!
Thnx

http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_01.jpg

Goro
07-27-2003, 01:10 PM
Here is the a update.
I added more details in the left area.

http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_02.jpg

OBT
07-27-2003, 10:10 PM
man, looks great. i love the colors. sharpen out the whole thing add details and your good to go. :thumbsup:

Rey
07-27-2003, 10:23 PM
The tree branch coming out of the top left corner seems a liitle flat
It could use a little definition.
Is this the background for the title?
It would be nice to see it in context with the title?
We can probably give you a better critique that way.

Looking good.

Xoveky
07-27-2003, 10:48 PM
it is a very good paint :applause:
maybe can u make more details
more details on tree
some athmospheric lights fx in the background

Goro
07-27-2003, 11:49 PM
thnx for your feedback. But unfortunally I'm already finished. Here are two pictures of the final version and the composite as divx503.avi.
C&C please. Cause when I have enough time I can still edit the intro.

intro_divx503_975KB (http://www.area-56.de/animations/tests/intro_divx503.avi)

http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_03.jpg

http://www.area-56.de/pics/kong_titlescreen_04.jpg

Xoveky
07-28-2003, 10:05 AM
i think it's good
nothing to criticz
:thumbsup:

Nerv
07-28-2003, 10:16 AM
But i think some more detail added to the leaves and branches would be nicer. :) Composition is great! :beer:

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