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PinkSherbet
06-30-2009, 03:23 PM
Hi!

I attended a Gobelin 2 weeks master class recently. This is one of the 2 clips that i am working on. A short 6 sec clip of a character and it's prop.

http://www.vimeo.com/5388384

If you see anything that is not working out for you, please feel free to drop your comments.
All critics are welcome!

Thanks alot!

Respawned
07-01-2009, 08:24 PM
Looks good. I would maybe hold the embarrassed expression a bit longer before going to sad, or at least slow the transition down.

PinkSherbet
07-02-2009, 05:07 PM
Hey yo! Thanks alot for your advice. I will work on the embarassment to the sad part. Really appreciate it. Thanks again!

PinkSherbet
07-05-2009, 05:12 AM
Hello everyone, here's my latest update. I've been working on my other clip, so didn't update this one. Anyway, here it is http://www.vimeo.com/5451952 , please drop me your comments, really appreciate your thoughts.

Thank you!

PinkSherbet
07-10-2009, 11:40 AM
Lastest updates :) I paid attention to the details of eye movement and facial expressions. Also held some of the poses longer and work on the fingers. Please write me your comments, or not I may just finalise this clip.

http://www.vimeo.com/5536295

Hope to see your response!

karan_vis
07-11-2009, 09:24 AM
Looks good , i have two things , first part looks slow , u can tighten it by 20%, U have around 24 frames for the turn .U can easily offset the hands when he gets shocked (around 4 secs on timeline). the body ,head and hands are moving together.



Karan

PinkSherbet
07-12-2009, 08:37 AM
Hi Karan, I did thought my beginning was rather slow, thanks for your comments. :)

PinkSherbet
07-14-2009, 09:14 AM
Hi eveyone,

here's my lastest update http://www.vimeo.com/5588130

i tighten the beginning part and overlap the part where he got shocked. I have watch a lot of times, and i can't really spot my mistakes. I hope you all can help me up.

Thanks!

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