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souldestroyer
06-28-2009, 09:18 PM
Hello,

I want to show a test of an animation I'm making. I hope I get your opinions and critics of it.
thanks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Br1ewa1PBs

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mistasam02
06-29-2009, 02:15 AM
Cool dude, I really like the character and personality in the walk. Could you playblast it without the rig, by chance?

EdtheHobbit
06-29-2009, 03:13 AM
yeah, I'd love to see it minus the rig as well. Good job thus far!

souldestroyer
06-30-2009, 08:25 PM
thanks for the comments,
here it is the test with no rig :-)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yfm616lQo9Y

souldestroyer
07-06-2009, 09:55 PM
hello I'm posting the third test, I hope i get your comments, opinions, advices, suggetions, everyone is accepted.

here is the link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RRo-nuiHS4

EdtheHobbit
07-06-2009, 10:14 PM
I like it! You might want to do something to really sell his intention as he's walking towards the crate. I would suggest going in one of two directions -- one, I'd say you could make him lower his head and narrow his eyes a bit, so that it reads more as curiosity. He could be examining the box as he walks up to it.

another way you might go about it is to make him just start walking in that direction, completely oblivious to the box at all. Have him look around, everywhere except where he's going. Then, when he runs into the box, it's a surprise!

He's got a lot of character already, and the reactions are good, but the first part of the animation doesn't really read into the intention of the character.

souldestroyer
08-27-2009, 12:46 AM
At last I'm posting the latest test, the number 4.
Hereś the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2J6u27LCQw

sugestions, advices, critiques are welcome :-)
And thank you for the suggetions given :-)

souldestroyer
09-03-2009, 07:07 PM
hello! well I have finished the last section of the animation. there are still some stuff to add/correct of the whole animation, but I think is becoming really great. Here are the links to the fifth tests, the flight :-)

These are two test, one from the camera point of view, and the other from another perspective.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uWISgBc5TzE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oXg6BvhkFZk

Greetings!
Salvador

souldestroyer
10-05-2009, 08:09 PM
Hey, guys! at last after three months of working on it I finally came with the final render of this animation :-). I have improved a lot of stuff to came to this. So here is the final render of this.
Thanks for all the tips and ideas, they helped me a lot!

Enjoy


Salvador
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KP3h1TAGpBQ

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