Secret Agent Entry: Robet Xu

[WhiteGuardian]

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Hello guys. This is my 1st participate in CGSociety Forum Contest. Being afraid to participate in early contests.
Interest with the theme and wanna improve myself that bring me here.

Vin city was known for years as criminal, drugs, and prositute city. Police in this city were under control by the Preman. That is an organization that control the city. They manage prostitude and drugs operation. No one good guys brave to fight them. Government sending Kilinova to stop all of this.
She is an Elite Special Agent that master in martial art and weapon. She is given a job to capture the head of the Preman.

Sorry for my bad english, but i hope you understand it.

Here is 3 options scene concept.
C n c are most welcome

[WhiteGuardian]

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Scene concept B

[WhiteGuardian]

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Scene concept C

[Irawan]

hi.
this is a good start my friend,i would like to make a bit simple or reduce the situation a little bit.you just need the leader/head and kilinova infront and on the back side just some of gangster not so much but a good one(?)and i think in this case you dont have to show dead people.what you have to show is the tension of the situation.

concept c is nice because the gangster see a bit part of the body from their leader.

*preman is not english lenguage i guest*

[wick3dsono]

hey pal, welcome to the challenge. i will keep my eyes on this. good luck

[WhiteGuardian]

Irawan
Hm...too much crowded not always making the concept good. I got it dude.
YOu're right about Preman word. I don't want to use gangster, yakuza or mafia. I want to use Preman, to make the sound different. Although in Indonesia language, it's same. LOL

Thx for your critic and Also for helping to chose. Really appreciate it. :)

wick3dsono
Thx dude. I will do it for your entry too. Good luck :)
Btw, how to add 2 page signature link like yours? Where to set it? Or that feature only for premium member?

[wick3dsono]

it's USER CP the top menu, under the FORUM menu. then you edit your SIGNATURE. then copy your link on your signature.

[Irawan]

go go go,not so much time left.i like the concept and the sketch looking forward for your next update.cheers.heri

[walrus]

Hi, WhiteGuardian, good to see you here.... don't tell me you seriously have time to finish this and a ComicCon Challenge entry too! Seriously? Wow!

I like the dramatic angle of this shot. The edge of the building, however, cuts off the main character from the rest of the scene compositionally. I might be nice to try moving the character to the right and moving that big vertical line left so that his arm is breaking its plane. :thumbsup:

Also, a bit hard to tell who that all is on the right side - maybe they could be a bit closer so that we could see them better? (Or at least one of them.)

Good luck!

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