Realistic portrait-A Young Girl

[ViolentMaid]

The right eye looks a little odd, like it's lazy or something, unless it's meant to be like that and both of the eyes look like they are a tad too high.

[Lillyth]

It's a very good job for a beginner. Some suggestions: you could try to make the lips a bit thicker and move them just a tiny bit to the left. The arms are a little skinny and the left hand's fingers are a bit too long . Also, try to smooth out the colors a little bit on her body, like they are on the face. I really like the hair, how you painted the lights and shadows. I like the eyes too, but they could be a bit bigger. Keep up the good work :thumbsup:

[xiaoajian]

The right eye looks a little odd, like it's lazy or something, unless it's meant to be like that and both of the eyes look like they are a tad too high.


Thank you very much for your suggestion!
You're quite right,I will revise her eyes.

[xiaoajian]

It's a very good job for a beginner. Some suggestions: you could try to make the lips a bit thicker and move them just a tiny bit to the left. The arms are a little skinny and the left hand's fingers are a bit too long . Also, try to smooth out the colors a little bit on her body, like they are on the face. I really like the hair, how you painted the lights and shadows. I like the eyes too, but they could be a bit bigger. Keep up the good work :thumbsup:


Thank you very much!I profited greatly form your suggestions.
I will continue to improve these problems.
I used a home-made brush painted her hair,and choose the middle tones of hair's colour.Then choose bright color painted the lights.At the same time,use the burn tool painted the shadows.
http://www.pcb-bbs.com/images/brush.jpg

[Lillyth]

Thanks for the tip :)

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