Character : Cartoon Foxy Fox

[rob-beddall]

hey!!:wavey:

wow, that eally isn't really what i was expecting.
almost had me laughing out loud in the office.
i really like your fox.
i think maybe his tail should be a little bigger and have a white tip.
( i think fox's have white tips on their tails?)

cheers!!

[Michto]

u probably right about the tail !

anyway it was my first serious try in animation
so i didn't take enough care to the texturing
and rendering quality...

[Michto]

pleeeeeeaaaaase answer to meeeeeeee

and tell me what u think about this

:scream:

[LP2]

hahahaha, excellent, i cant fault it :)

[neverman]

hey now!!

this one came together a lot better than the little crock guy.
for the most part this anim is solid - the legs look the best - the two things that stick out to me the most are the arms and the tail.
Not sure what you were going for with the arms - the look like they are punching or something??? also something like a tail is a hard thing to loop into one cycle - try making a two loop cycle for the tail - that way it will seam a little more natural. You could also use a little spine motion - that would make it a little less stiff and could counter the hard head snap on the down step. Neway all just suggestions. Lookn good.
:thumbsup:

[unicron]

Ah yes, the animators survival kit... very nice.

Actually the hands do pretty much what they do in that book... of course I don't really know what that is.

nice job:beer:

[Rivendale]

Oh man, the state of mind he must be in...:D

Pretty cool actually!

[Michto]

Thanks to all for your answers...
Thanks Neverman for your helpfull advices, u seem to know a lot about animation...
As u can see (for those who've seen my other animation) it's better with the help of an animation book... Richard Williams is Great !

keep answering, I'll come back soon with new works...

[Michto]

just willing to have more crits on this


http://perso.wanadoo.fr/mishto/anim/fox_walk.avi


thanks

[GFX-Arts]

Nice work :)

[ironist]

good work

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.