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vasa

07-25-2003, 12:38 PM

Ahem.. Hello all!

I have post my very first serious CG drawing here, and
i hope that you send me a c&c.

I drawing this pic to one of my friend, who are go to another
city. I like to visualize the hope in a good future. I like to
see the lights shining. I want to draw this in cartoonish style.

How can i improve this pic?

train: http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye1_l.jpg
http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye2_l.jpg
http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye3_l.jpg

first version (color test): http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye3.jpg

I doing this pic with mouse.
Thanks for all! :thumbsup:

vasa

07-28-2003, 09:22 AM

There was something wrong with the link, so i updated it.
I'am working on the pic, and update it soon.

Please post a critique, i need to improve it!

Thanks.

Nerv

07-28-2003, 10:10 AM

Colour scheme is good.

The girl looks horrible to me, like a ghost in the train.:shame:
Yellow spacing seems too much in compositing wise.
Keep it up! Take the advantage of using some references, specially train. :)

vasa

07-28-2003, 10:39 AM

Thanks Nerv!

Yes, i have no reference while i drawing this, i just visualize..
I am searching for trains on net now.
And i start drawing this on paper, making a clean line art first.

vasa

07-30-2003, 08:42 AM

I start painting the train, i hope you like it.
My problem is painting the windows..
This is not an easy job. :)

http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye1_l.jpg

http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye2_l.jpg

http://www.freeweb.hu/vasa78/goodbye3_l.jpg

What do you think?

Please post comments!
Thans!

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