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Edouard
07-25-2003, 10:53 AM
This is a still I'have made for my new website...made with
3dmax 5 rendered with Vray

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/209113.jpg

C&C please:D
Q_B
07-25-2003, 11:16 AM
Lovely cartoonish look! Great!
I like specially that outdoor sign, it's really great!
Only crit/comment i can think of is the illumination... for one, the front facade is too white relatively to the surrounding illumination, and the shadows r too black perhaps, looks like its gettin sun right in full ... i mean, lookin at that bkgrnd sky i just can't shake the feelin that the light is not quite right, it looks late afternoon, and u got white light on the front walls. Other than that , looks awesome! Love the style! Congrats!:applause:
Sharky
07-25-2003, 11:19 AM
Really well done, I would just say that I think (it is my opinion) the grass on the left is a little bit too dark
wahahaha
07-25-2003, 12:18 PM
nice house model!!!! i like it a lot!! looking forward to see your next work!!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :drool:
danylyon
07-25-2003, 02:17 PM
Very lovely! I really like the house.. I'll have to agree with Q_B a bit.. although I don't think the house is too bright or badly lit (o contraire!).. I think the grass is too dark.. and maybe a bit too green. (I think you made the grass and the ground green.. the ground is normally more brouwnish)

really great look.. keep it up!
mora
07-25-2003, 02:30 PM
cute house,the roofing might leak but who cares,would look cuter with low fencing around house :scream:
summeralive
07-26-2003, 04:35 PM
guess u been studying a lot about the lighting and details...
good work!
hope to see more!





:drool: mybe some comment on my page!
Rivendale
07-26-2003, 05:54 PM
Hi Edouard, that looks great! I really like the design.

I think the sky doesn't fit the rest in style because the sky is realistic and the rest is a bit cartoony. Something more painterly would be better I think.
Also the main light seems to be coming from the left in the scene while the sun on the backdrop is behind the house, so it doesn't match.
The doghouse seems a bit scewed to me.

Keep it up!:thumbsup:
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