Still: self portrait

[ndat]

Cool, I always like your heads, you got the skills... one thing that strikes me as odd though is the brow line, it seems a bit to sharp? Kinda hard to critque, this is the kinda thing people get beat up for :p. You got a really got start there, get the ref up and we can crit more :). Oh are you going to do your whole body or just what shows in a portrait?

[Deestrakt]

nice ! everything is in place, natural look and good proportions, its a good model. would be very interesting to compare with your reference pic, and if possible a wire would be nice to see too.

maybe u could add a little relief in the area between the upper eyelid and the eyebrow, in the area where the upper eyelid and the orbit meets.

[sanciok]

I got into texturing
Here is an update!

[modestmouse]

it looks very good for a model but i think it would help if you showed a picture of yourself!

[chikega]

I think everything looks to be nicely proportioned. If I could make one small suggestion, you might want to take a look at the corners of the eye that I have circled below. It might help, if you push these back a little to form a subtle indentation - this is where the wrinkles form when you smile or as you age. Right now, it makes the eyes look like they're bulging out a little. :eek:

http://www.3ddmd.com/images/C4Dgroup/Millo1.JPG

http://www.3ddmd.com/images/Char_Shultz/Devilish_wrinkle1a.jpg
http://www.3ddmd.com/Devilish.htm

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