Figure Studies need critique

[CTRL]

hey there, you have quite the touch for colours and lighting.

Things you should do to improve is your brushwork. At least try other sizes and settings (play around with size, opacity and angle set to pen pressure) if you use any tablet. Also take more use of the eyedropper tool, to make any color you alt-click on your primary color. Should help soften the overcontrasted areas.

Good luck, let's see some more!

[Ingraban]

They look good, I personally like the rough style.
But however the stomach of the boxer seems wrong, if he raises his leg the perspective should be differnet.
Maybe draw the second leg so it becomes clearer?

[tyler9879]

thanks for the feed back guys!, I'll try to post some more soon.

[cgmodeler]

Loved the second one, each stroke makes it feel like in motion even if a still scene, for the firt one, there is a thing that feels a little wrong, the hip, bellybutton part, it feels big and in a bad position, turning like a 3/4 view, with all the back displaying on a side view, makes it difficult to see the torsion, maybe if you reduce the hip size or the perspective of the belly to match the whole torso perspective, it'll fix it.

GL

[tyler9879]

quick portrait study....still can't get a good likeness with ought a grid of some sort:argh::sad:
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee213/tylers/figurescopy-1.jpg

[tyler9879]

Here's one more fighter sketch and two bulls for my practice on animal anatomy (which I'm still pretty sketchy on). any feedback is greatly appreciated
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee213/tylers/figurescopy-2.jpghttp://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee213/tylers/figure1s.jpghttp://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee213/tylers/figure1copy.jpg

[tyler9879]

quick hand sketchhttp://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee213/tylers/handcopy.jpg

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