Character: Sugoi

[Angel O'Death]

hrmm, if i sound a bit harsh, don't mind me, i'm not too good with words! :)

anyway, i think you have potential, but you need to study anatomy more to understand how the body flows and is shaped. as well as muscle structure.

i don't think the thick lines work well at all. they make the image very harsh and difficult to look at.

am i correct in assuming that you were going for an anime look? or were you trying to get somthing more comic book like? either way, i would study the styles more so you can better reproduce the shading styles as well as the 'flow' of the general picture.

i like the colors you have chosen though. and i like the idea of this picture.

keep practicing and don't give up. you'll get better all the time! :wip:

[MadnessX]

Originally posted by Angel O'Death
hrmm, if i sound a bit harsh, don't mind me, i'm not too good with words! :)

anyway, i think you have potential, but you need to study anatomy more to understand how the body flows and is shaped. as well as muscle structure.

i don't think the thick lines work well at all. they make the image very harsh and difficult to look at.

am i correct in assuming that you were going for an anime look? or were you trying to get somthing more comic book like? either way, i would study the styles more so you can better reproduce the shading styles as well as the 'flow' of the general picture.

i like the colors you have chosen though. and i like the idea of this picture.

keep practicing and don't give up. you'll get better all the time! :wip:

Heya angel,

Nah your not to harsh :)
And yeah I was trying for a anime look.
Thanks for the usefull tips I'm very sure they will come in handy :arteest:

GreetZ

Maddy

[summeralive]

;) well good try!
are u studying in animation?
anyway i think u should study more about human propotion
and lighting more! it help improve ur pic!
put more time studying the detail of a human.....
it works!

good try!don't give up!





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