Secret Agent Entry: Bj?rn Schmitz

[Vampyrangel]

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My first ideas .... i?m thinking of..... and thinking

[L-rac]

For this early stage the city behind your notes looks just awesome!
I definitly keep an eye on your posts...

keep up the good work an best of luck!

[Hamlet-ID]

that is a impressive scene, I will keep an eye on your work

[Vampyrangel]

Thanks for your interests....
I´am on my way to do the best......

[Vampyrangel]

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my first ideas are going on for drawing for the last 2 hours. but in workout process everything change!

[Vampyrangel]

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This is the end for today....

[dboydesign]

Cool scene, get the Fifth Element feeling ;)
See the grill of your car is inspired from Aston Martin DBS?

Will be following this:)

[Vampyrangel]

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After one week of hospital, now back to find my old ideas.....
I hope i find them much faster if i get....

[HFix]

interesting scene idea...i think to get the feel that you want? the car has to become your character...so you have to develop personality with the car bc you wont be showing the character? it seems like a challenge, goodluck hope to see more!

[hawk700]

Amazing concept

I like the lighting and the atmosphere

[DarwinsMishap]

Hope all is well, first off.

So far, I'm really interested in how your work comes together here; the car(s) are a fantastic idea. The entire feel of this one to me smacks of speed, chaos, and target practice. :)

[FalyneVarger]

Looking great so far.

[alshakno]

I like the composition,

and why you were in hospital?(just curious)

[KOryH]

wow cool.
I love this sort of thing

[tyleen]

oh this is a different idea. I havn't seen anyone doing something like this. Really cool. I like the flying cars with an epic chase in the air. Kinda get a Fifth Element vibe. cant wait to see this go further!

[Vampyrangel]

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Tested and tested and tasted......
:)

[Vampyrangel]

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First shooting of the policecar

[Vampyrangel]

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The effects are to colored and the complete scene is to fabulos shinning. More Dirt style must showen.....

[prabath]

Great concept you got there Bjorn.Looking forward to how it turns out.

Cheers!

[Vampyrangel]

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Next Step - Ideas by doing

[Vampyrangel]

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New color, think of it...

[Popsaart]

cool concept! its going to be epic!

[Vampyrangel]

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A little bit hot summer and the ideas are going, like they should.
My thinking process is not so fast at this degrees... 38 in sun.... i burst.

[Vampyrangel]

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Working on

[Vampyrangel]

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Nice looking for me.... this is the first real rendering of the ready build Agents Car.

The Sceneelement - AGENT CAR:
The vehicle has been destroyed by the pursuing police vehicles and the agent is on the escape with the help of her backpack. She is looking most urgently for a possible hiding place and finds with her the old desolate hotel on which she heads now.
The statepower follows....

[Vampyrangel]

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One or two little changes and it is ready.....

[Vampyrangel]

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The basefigure is Victoria and the clothes are shadow dancer.....

But this is only the first idea of the settings and harmony of the Agents posing

[walrus]

I like your concept, and the female model is looking great! I don't think your overall composition is as effective as it could be yet: It's got all of the points of interest relegated to the 4 corners while the center of the picture is the part you're not supposed to focus on. It could be useful to try urning the camera to make the female much more prominent while putting the police cars in a more secondary role. Good luck! :thumbsup:

[Vampyrangel]

This is almost the same what already thinks to me some days ago.

There are some good tools which for a good picture composition provide. But I am not the best planner, sometimes, unfortunately. I am very creatively impulsive.

But I also think the agent should take the center of intrests.

This will still gives me a little bit to bite..... :hmm:

[Vampyrangel]

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more and more test renderings and impressions for impression ......

[Vampyrangel]

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Have a look and i think thats looking good

[DogBreath]

Looking good Vampy. May I suggest for the compostion, that the police car up the wall is about to crash, sparks flying as it slides along the wall, the spy's car only needs to show some (move it down out of frame a bit), and move the spy closer to camera, so that the motion of leaving the car has thrown her foward not sideways. Maybe the spy can be half the size of the render you have just done, Then the cars can be arranged around her in a triangle, top > left > bottom.

[pierzak]

I can see some great ideas. looking good so far :)

[Vampyrangel]

Thanx for your replys. There are very good ideas and tips in it.
Thanx..... :rolleyes:

I few more elements must created and than i can play with the scene harmony.
Your ideas help very much.....

[Vampyrangel]

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First tast of the scene. Get some lights and structured the basehouses.....

[Vampyrangel]

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All the day and all the night, lights and position on every position of the scene and now i find it must be ready for the first....

[Vampyrangel]

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A new Element for the scene.... :)

[Vampyrangel]

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Looks good at this time.

What are your meaning?

[joecyriac]

Wow you've got some great elements in your scene. I think it looks good so far. Have you considered changing her expression a little to show more confidence, like she's more in control here? Also you could tweak the position of the holster, and her left arm, they look a little strange being foreshortened that way.

[Vampyrangel]

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Texturing is good for creativity

[Vampyrangel]

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First preview of the agentscar explusion. Oh ha, that must be overworked....

[Vampyrangel]

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Tasted colors are very good looking. But not perfekt....

[Vampyrangel]

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In this way i hate to build houses. So much work for background?

[dimat]

Nice ideas, kinda blade runner theme?. I´ll keep checking your work, it might end up really cool.

[Vampyrangel]

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I think that sounds good ...
or what do you thinking....?

[Vampyrangel]

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Different kinds of building looks - my ideas are extended.....

[Vampyrangel]

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First impressions of the color and concept

[Vampyrangel]

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A littlebit Candy. But the left side looks good at this time. But now the right side. And then the coloring of each side of the street.

[Vampyrangel]

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A lot of people gives my city the life what it needs

[Vampyrangel]

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For today i?m ready

[Vampyrangel]

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The first look of composition. Left and right side together. Harmonycheck and thinking of new ideas for the rightside buildingmodeling.

[Vampyrangel]

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Building the old hotel on the right side

[Vampyrangel]

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Now i think i?m ready with modelling. Now the textures and the colors......

[Vampyrangel]

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This is my first full rendering with buildings, cars agent and explusion. I have change the colorsettings from the blue and candy stuff to real coloring.

I think the composition is good and gives a great warm feeling for the viewing. Now the buildings must texturing and give the scene the final looking. But for the last look i thinking about the agents stuff it is not enough equipt.... Make some ideas on paper and took to her image.

[Vampyrangel]

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Texturing of the right side and first banner images.

[Vampyrangel]

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Final rendering for afterworks and postproduktion

[Vampyrangel]

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I have rendering the right side of the Street and put the to images together.
Looks like very good for me, what do you think?

[Vampyrangel]

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For this with a high rendertime i got the 3 Images of the peoples on the sky gangway. The are showed as sheep like going on and don?t intrested in the action around them.

Because every day something has happend around them. In this age of century it is the heavyest way of life.

[Vampyrangel]

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Rendering of the Explosions. First rendering of the Astons Explosion and than the Policecars explosion.

[Vampyrangel]

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After one Night of sleep my view is now a little bit better on my done work.
I think the harmony between the light blue lightning
city and the real yellow exolusions is not ok.

So i got a little shimrin of blue in the end of the explusionclouds. So i got a better flow from the explusions to the city background.

[Vampyrangel]

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On this step i worked out the background of this megacity. Than i got this sepia shining in the backwardfocus of the city to get a dirt looking.

This is for smoothing the background and gives the front of this pic more coming out feeling.

[Vampyrangel]

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I got a the deep of the city and focus.
Sepia helps me to destroy the heavy colorshining.

[Vampyrangel]

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After the high res rendering of the agent i have put the background and the Agent together. I hate it so much to masking hair and persons which will integrate into a picture.
But after a few tests and cutings now it is perfekt took together.

[Vampyrangel]

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a new layer with the agents mainperson will be the layer for speed.
Overworked and change some speed is born

[Vampyrangel]

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This is the agent in forward looking. I think the colors and the lightning must be a little more and on thiis way i got the lightning and glow layers to make all the agent shining much more.

[Vampyrangel]

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One night and today a new look on my work. I think all this doing is ok. But it is to clear for me. So i tested some versions of artist looking on my work and i think this aquarelleffect will be good and gives all a littel taste of Comic Art, i like that.

[Vampyrangel]

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Software: BodyPaint,CINEMA 4D,Illustrator,Photoshop,Poser

Some decades in the future "Dynosis" has brought the whole worldpower in itself. An enterprise which the whole medical care of the people controls. The people are packed together for their protection in megacities.
The people should be protected against the mightiest enemy of Dynosis, the Vampyres. Nevertheless, Dynosis, manufacturer of the first synthesised blood, primary is not to protect the people in the cities, but to destroy the Vampyres.
The Vampyrclans have populated the whole remaining world and try to tap desperately the blood reserves of Dynosis to continued their existence. However, up to now this has not succeeded and many have already died.

Now, many years agents are trained by the Vampyres, wich should penetrate into the mega cities and find the informations of the locations with the biggest reserve blood banks of Dynosis. However, nobody has managed this, till this day.
Some hours ago, nevertheless, Syliana, a young vampyr agent, penetrate into the main headquarters of Dynosis and steal the best secure informations about the locations of the blood banks. With this secret in her neurochip she is on the run out of this dammend city, to bring all Vampyrs the informations what survive guarantee. However, her vehicle was already destroy and she could escape with the help of her hoverbackpack. But she is in one of the more underdeveloped, deeper areas of the city. She sees with the climbing out from her exploding Hoveraston, an old not inhabited Toytownhotel, wich her way goes to escape her pursuers and to collect new strength, becouse her blood reserves bend to the end.

What does not anticipate to her, nevertheless is, the old hotel is used by the vampyr underground as one of their many bases in the whole city.

[Vampyrangel]

Hallo,

this is my final image.

What do you thinking about and what do you mean?
What do you thinking about the story?

Please give me some statements.

Good luck for all who have to do something to the final.

Björn

VAMPYR ANGEL arts & graphics
www.vampyrangel.com

[walrus]

Nice work - she came out really well! I find it a little weird that the sky is the same color as all of the buildings. It seems as though you could add a little more color diversity by making that some other color. Also, in all honesty, the explosions could use a lot more work. THey feel as though they're placeholders airbrushed in quickly. Maybe it's because we're all used to seeing big beautiful explosions from action movies, with clouds lit from within by huge gobs of fir, but that's what I think would work well here... otherwise, her car just got taken out by a smoke bomb. :shrug: Whatever you choose, nice work and good luck! :thumbsup:

[Vampyrangel]

That the sky is in the same Coloring like the town, is that isn´t the sky, but it should be the higher levels of the City.
In the explosions I simply did not want so much the Glamur as usual in Hollywood. I find the viewer, nevertheless is deflected very often by the essentials.

Many greetings
Björn

[Vampyrangel]

May you not give me a little bit more Feedback?

Greetings
Bjoern

[DogBreath]

Hi Vampy, looking good, you have heaps of time left to add lots of changes. Maybe you could change the pose to a sky diving pose or swan dive (a letter X shape), and add lots more details and tone variation in the background like highlights on windows and buildings. Less blur on her car and more blur on left police car. Have a play around with photoshop and layers.

[Vampyrangel]

Hallo,

hope you are all in the end of your Images.

I give you some good luck.

Greetings
Björn

Ps: Are this multi entrys serious?

[Vampyrangel]

Hallo,

this is my first time here.

I hope you can give me a little bit more feedback for my final image.

Hope so for later artworks.

Thanx so much forward
Björn Schmitz

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