PDA

View Full Version : Air Nutz Animated Short

Solbester
06-14-2009, 01:25 PM
This is a little animated short i created. Its my first one so please be gentle lol... let me know what you guys think! :)

http://www.aniboom.com/animation-video/360327/Air-Nutz/

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b146/SOLBESTER/airNutzFilmStrip.jpg
DickieGriffin
06-14-2009, 02:21 PM
sound levels! I have to turn it up to hear him speaking and nealy scared myself to death when that guy got hit with the tree!

This is quite an undertaking for a first go at animation. I think this timings okay, which is usually a problem in peoples early work, but you need to have a look at ‘moving holds’, ‘overlap’ and ‘follow through’ as I think your animation lacks any real snap.



Have a look at “The animators survival kit” by Richard Williams if you can get yourself a copy and have a go at the examples.


keep going though, its very promising!
Solbester
06-14-2009, 06:01 PM
sound levels! I have to turn it up to hear him speaking and nealy scared myself to death when that guy got hit with the tree!

This is quite an undertaking for a first go at animation. I think this timings okay, which is usually a problem in peoples early work, but you need to have a look at ‘moving holds’, ‘overlap’ and ‘follow through’ as I think your animation lacks any real snap.



Have a look at “The animators survival kit” by Richard Williams if you can get yourself a copy and have a go at the examples.


keep going though, its very promising!

Thank you for the reply! I had the animation kit but it got stolen in school... I'm looking to buy another copy with my next pay check... i totally agree on the holds and snaps and follow through lol truth is i ran out of time lol that's always a problem. Thank you for taking the time to reply i really appreciate it. If its okay with you i would like to show you my next short and get some feed back.

P.S the sound levels are being fixed now it was a real headache just to get that lol
DickieGriffin
06-14-2009, 06:08 PM
No problem fella. i'd love to take alook at any stuff you have, tho bear in mind i'm still a student myself!
CGTalk Moderation
06-14-2009, 06:08 PM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.