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fletchman

07-23-2003, 01:35 PM

Hi Folks,

Here is a reworked version of a character i worked on. Please let me know how I can improve on it.

http://pachome2.pacific.net.sg/~afletch/frontview.jpg

:cool:

JIII

07-23-2003, 03:12 PM

funky I would stick to more human style anatomy it looks very well very odd indeed. maybe post a few pics of the face but hmm this is interesting.

I really don't know what to say but the body looks awfully weird.

flingster

07-23-2003, 04:16 PM

he needs a double D on the chest.....!!
maybe try getting a more lycra look to the blue suit and maybe try red leather gloves.

(how about a wire for the whole thing also..)

That Adrian Guy

07-23-2003, 04:20 PM

Hmmm....

Your edgeloops are flowing strangely. Your anatomy is also way off.

Honestly, only thing I can recommend is trying to redirect your edge loops and look at more anatomy references.

Your proportions need some work as well.

LoGiY

07-23-2003, 08:16 PM

his eye looks cut out :)

fletchman

07-25-2003, 12:11 PM

Hi Guys,

Thanks for the comments. I am a complete noob when it comes to 3d with no formal training. I am happy that I could actually complete a character (albeit not such a good one) I unfortunately have no art background so it is a bit tough going. I will try to look at some anatomy pics and some other reference pics as well. I hope to be able to improve on the character soon. Thanks :buttrock:

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