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Irawan
06-12-2009, 09:21 PM
heri irawan is entered in the "Secret Agent" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/secret_agent/view_entries.php?challenger=17724)

Latest Update: Final Image: After feeling safe
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249727105_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=6032794#post6032794)


Since the militer has taken over the country the voice of the people has become smaller and smaller. Although they try to fight the corrupt regime with demonstrations there is no chance for the people anymore to change the situation because nobody can proof the incorrect wheelings and dealings of the militer. so the last chance is to send a secret agent who has to find the clear evidence of the corrupt behaviour of the regime.
For this purpose they are sending a guy who is able to work undercover either as a man or woman. When he(she) is invited to accompany the general to a big militer gathering, he´s finally able to get an evidence for the corrupt ways of the militer from three military men whom he finally kills in the toilet where there is no camera surveillance.
After feeling already safe he´s having a piss when suddenly more militer is entering the toilet...

Special thanks for the input to:

My wife(Sabine)
Randis Albion
Michael Dashow
Björn Norberg
Fernando Porcel
Younes Elharoussi
Christof Stanits
Tyrone Maddams
Ignacio Fernandez Rios
Stefan hardloader
Louis Lugas Wicaksono
Peter Nguyen
Thomas Haas-Christensen
Sam Brickey
Michor Lu
Sachin N Iyengar
Stephanie Maulding
William james Hallett
Cyril Jedor
Michel de Longue-Epee
Andrew Blackman



Thanks for the Feedback to:

Fabricio Moraes
Gonçalo Pereira
Michael Ulrich
Rachel Finley
S. Clark
Julien Lambé
Carl Linné
Alessandro Lima
Tom
Rishikesh Nandlaskar
Sean Hong
Daniel Merkel
Joseph Harford
Trung Le
George Huszar
Mats Minnhagen
Imara Sargeant
Felix Lahme
Kerem Gogus
tonytrout
Nino Junghans
Alwyn Talbot
Michael See
smallone3d
William james Hallett
Carl Linné
nirupama francis
William Zazill
Diogo Gaudencio
Jack Oakman
Ding Wang
Craig Bruyn
Jorge Lescale
Robet Xu
Stanimira Stoeva
Kory Heinzen
Paul Bush
Humberto Mangino
Luciano Arcuri
Lasse Rützou Bruntse
William Elliott
Andrew E.
Chritinagar
Michael Kalimukwa
Mantas Sim
Pappy Onwuagbu
Andrew Blackman
Jay Barrios
Isuardi Therianto
Fabio Oscar Corica
light86
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Marat ars
Pawel Lewandowski
Jean-Denis Coindre
Jonathan Clark
Imara Sargeant
Mariano fernandez
Christian Shoup
Ostertag Stéphane
cristina
Mario Perry
Mostafa Nassar
Daniel Bayona
Larissa Kuznetsova
Douglas Souza

and everybody in the Forum
Thanks to CGTALK for the contest!
good luck to all of you,
cheers.heri

Irawan
06-12-2009, 09:38 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1244839096_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1244839096_medium.jpg)

this is just warming up, intermezzo one hour with this sketch.honestly i dont have concrete idea at the moment,i am quite busy with project-but perhaps in the next month or next two month or the last hour, i am very happy to see this challange.this is the place where we meet(virtual) and share the knowledge.good luck to everybody in the challenge

Spyndel
06-12-2009, 09:47 PM
Hey, nice sketch! Did you use Scarlet Johansson as a facial reference? I thought I detected some resemblance.

Good luck, can't wait to see more!

orlenka
06-12-2009, 10:25 PM
Nice it looks like the cover of a comic book :) Nice sketch !

mr_carl
06-12-2009, 10:43 PM
Looks great, love the colours and the stile.

Irawan
06-13-2009, 07:34 AM
everything is not fix right now.
i dont take any facial reference for this sketch,this was just quick and dirty.but you are right she is a bit like scarlet johansson.
i just have a look her picture on google, probably isnt bad idea to take her as a reference,
have fun........

alessandrolima
06-14-2009, 01:13 AM
Impresive Shoot!

God job! Keep it!

whitecastle09
06-14-2009, 01:36 AM
nice look to her can wait to see more

ShogunWarrior
06-14-2009, 05:23 AM
this is good stuff man, i love the green texture and her gesture as come get some!! hehehe

polygonwarrior
06-14-2009, 09:37 AM
he he he. nice looking agent. looking forward to ur work.:)

SeanHong
06-14-2009, 01:23 PM
nice warming up~
and can't wait to see your job:)

Merkel
06-14-2009, 01:49 PM
She is hot! I liked!! :p
Keep the good work!

kiboSVK
06-14-2009, 11:22 PM
she is gr8 nice pose a I looking forward to your progress

JHarford
06-15-2009, 01:09 AM
very nice work!!

illuzionizt
06-15-2009, 01:59 AM
Sexy agent :D

Georgeh
06-16-2009, 12:24 AM
I am sure you are going to do a great job.
You are one of my faves.

Minnhagen
06-16-2009, 09:32 PM
That's a really nice sketch!

Imara
06-17-2009, 05:00 AM
Actually. Yeah. This is the best thing that ive seen in here so far. I like where its going. But i hope that you get to finish it. Looking foward to it.

TheRazorsEdge
06-17-2009, 08:28 AM
Very nice concept! Looking forward to your progress!

Selamat pertanding!

Cheers!

Kerem
06-17-2009, 12:32 PM
wow I love it! I'm definitely diggin her face and expression!

tonytrout
06-17-2009, 12:40 PM
very cool and hot

Irawan
06-22-2009, 12:05 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245668709_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245668709_medium.jpg)

my first concept for secret agent.
i am not sure with the setting and format/layout right now.
i am thinking also about really modern toilet instead of dirty and normal toilet.
.........?????

he is secret agent,he is strong and also clever but he is also beautiful,adorable,hot and sexy.
nobody think he is he but everybody think he is she.
and please dont tell everybody about his secret otherweis nobody call him secret agent.

platernity
06-22-2009, 12:09 PM
WOW really funny xD

But something disturb me... is it a men ? He piss like a guy :)



colors are really great !

Neubius
06-22-2009, 12:11 PM
she's a dude ?! ?

:) great sketch. super dramatic lighting.
good work!

MichaelZHsee
06-22-2009, 12:27 PM
holy cow~:scream:now thats what im talkin about mate.love the twist!

Irawan
06-22-2009, 02:45 PM
he is secret agent,he is strong and also clever but he is also beautiful,adorable,hot and sexy.
nobody think he is he but everybody think he is she.
and please dont tell everybody about his secret otherweis nobody call him secret agent.

smallone3d
06-22-2009, 02:55 PM
lol. This is sickening funny. Wow what a twist.
The angle almost looks like a security cam.

Keep it coming.

snake08
06-22-2009, 03:00 PM
LOLOL THIS IS AWESOME!! one of the more kooler ideas I've seen, totally caught me off guard. Great concept mate:thumbsup:

aghill
06-22-2009, 03:07 PM
hehe - its awsome! The camera angle could be a bit more dramatic though...

alessandrolima
06-22-2009, 03:23 PM
Hey man!

Good sketch, but, I prefer that "She" will be really "She". Ehehe!

Well, but the scene sounds good for me!

W-I-L
06-22-2009, 06:59 PM
genius... and corrent image looks like a comic panel... ould love to see that character in a graphic novel... very good idea...

Irawan
06-23-2009, 05:36 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245731774_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245731774_medium.jpg)

last night i tried to make another camera angle,what do you think?....thanks!

mr_carl
06-23-2009, 07:33 AM
The new angle looks more actionpacked, looks very good better than the last one.

Irawan
06-23-2009, 07:49 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245739764_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245739764_medium.jpg)

i try to get more detail sketch.

Irawan
06-23-2009, 07:51 AM
thanks mr_carl!

niruf
06-23-2009, 08:30 AM
LOL..interesting! ...kinda like ur first layout better.. shows more ..but I also like the close up of the guys on the floor here...best of luck!

Zazill8
06-23-2009, 11:23 AM
Quite cool already, Don't you think she's a bit messy for a special agent? :D

Irawan
06-23-2009, 11:33 AM
she's a bit messy..yes you are right.
but she is not she,she is he.....:hmm:?!?

polygonwarrior
06-23-2009, 11:49 AM
woh!! she looks too sexy to be he. keep her as she. ha ha .
keep it up;)

Neubius
06-23-2009, 11:53 AM
hahahaha excellent!

i can't work out if the guy on the floor is scared of the gun or shocked about the... other thing !

haha ace :D

zlux
06-23-2009, 12:06 PM
Nice sketch, i love your draw!

Irawan
06-23-2009, 01:04 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245758668_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1245758668_medium.jpg)

just quick and dirty coloring.thanks a lot for critic and feedback.

obux
06-23-2009, 01:46 PM
real crazy twist - though I would have waited untill the very last image with this surprise!

Good luck
oBux

Zazill8
06-23-2009, 01:49 PM
:deal: That is so wrong ...
How about making the bathroom even more reflective, even the roof . .. ?

MonteCristo-3DT
06-23-2009, 06:21 PM
LOL. That's hilarious. Definitely an undercover agent then.

rawgon
06-23-2009, 08:44 PM
ahahahah! great style dude! looking forward for moooore! this gonna be good!

have fun!

gonçalo

dingwang6
06-23-2009, 10:41 PM
man, how much did this guy spend on the surgery??:eek:

this body is hot,his gf will be jealous if he got one.lol
nice work btw:thumbsup:

redfrog
06-23-2009, 11:30 PM
Great idea. cool compostion and one sexy agent. Great work!

rattlesnake
06-23-2009, 11:53 PM
wow, crazy thing..hahah i agree with nandlaskar..hahaha but its a very cool concept!!
:D Dude looks like a lady!!!

RAK
06-23-2009, 11:53 PM
Hi, i like your aproach to the whole concept. And it sortof suits the whole secret agent thing (talk about ruining a disguise), but it tells a complex story quite well. Keep an eye on perspective and structure as some of the elements (urinals) are a bit of. Also i find that all the ceiling lights distract from the action and may also prevent some dramatic lighting.

Great work though (i realy love your initial sketch)

RRobinson
06-24-2009, 09:44 AM
Love the sketches and idea, definately an agent I'd rather not see "uncovered" ;)

FalyneVarger
06-24-2009, 09:48 AM
Out of all of the ideas everyone has had so far, THIS is by far my favorite.

wick3dsono
06-24-2009, 09:49 AM
wow. look sexy from back, surprising at the front. she(he)'s peeing while standing!!

Irawan
06-24-2009, 01:55 PM
thank you!
the anatomy and the perspective is not really ok right now(quick and dirty),but i will fix it before final painting.

do you think i have to make him not too sexy?

do you think adding blood in to picture will make better look and feel or better like it is?

the whole toilet reflective will disturb the composition,i thing i will keep it closer to the sketch i have right now.


i hope i have no other ideas..
thanks a lot for your support

wick3dsono
06-24-2009, 04:13 PM
im not agree for the blood, not in composition context, just to make the secret agent's clean and neat while doing his(omg, i can't believe to say he than she) job

Neubius
06-24-2009, 04:21 PM
i think she has to be pretty sexy, other wise there won't be the same level of confusion.. if you know what i mean :/


:)

Irawan
06-25-2009, 04:32 AM
hi louis and alwyn thanks for your feedback.

WhiteGuardian
06-26-2009, 01:50 AM
Wow, nice to meet you here again. :)
Nice progress so far.
I think i will try to participate in this contest, but still confuse how i started?

Irawan
06-26-2009, 07:02 AM
hi robet, (just click!) join or enter the challenge.and have fun!
i will come visiting to your thread.

TyroneMaddams
06-26-2009, 02:30 PM
OMG awesome!! ahahhaa this is so cool...

can't wait to see your next update! :)

- Ty

rePLAY
06-26-2009, 05:06 PM
Very good so far.
I'm just concern about the perspective of the upper part of her body.
Her left hand seems twisted unnaturally.
All the rest is very good! :)

Irawan
06-26-2009, 06:30 PM
Hi TyroneMaddams,will update with some detail soon.

Hi rePLAY, Thanks for your constructive comment, that was very quick and dirty i will try to fix out in the next step.thanks a lot.

KOryH
06-26-2009, 07:13 PM
she seems to find keeping some of her parts secret.

WhiteGuardian
06-27-2009, 07:13 AM
I have started my entry. You may see it here (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=291&t=779207)
Need c n c from you dude :)

mechaniac
06-27-2009, 10:34 AM
hey heri!
great concept you got there! love the idea as this is really some secret!!
my crit would be the way the guy in the background is holding/dropping his gun. I think you should rotate the gun so he is holding it the right way round but loosing his grip already. I also think he should be looking at her pecker, so the last thing he sees in his life is that gross thing in her pants
and also the viewer gets guided to her secret.

cant wait to see your finished image!! go for gold!

mic
06-27-2009, 02:17 PM
I really like the new composition. I agree with rePLAY about the hand. Anyway, very cool concept. :)

Creativebush
06-27-2009, 04:41 PM
Fantastic concept, the most secret of secret agents. I think you've nailed it, can't wait to see your finished work.

humandesignlab
06-27-2009, 05:04 PM
Your concpt sketch is awsome. I like your second concept, it´s irreverent. Maybe I would work a bit more the bad guys. Did you use a chincel marker in painter for the first sketch?

Irawan
06-27-2009, 05:19 PM
hi christof,
thanks a lot for visiting my thread and also your great input for the gun position,
the eyes direction i have changed already, curently i am working on his face/expression and detail.

hi mic,
yes you are right,that was quick sketch,i will fix it in the next update,Thanks for your constructive comment

hi creativebush,
thanks master vector!i will update soon.

hi humandesignlab,
that was quick sketch, it just for the layout and define camera position,thanks to remind me about that. i am using photoshop program and standard brush.

Hamlet-ID
06-28-2009, 02:54 AM
That is a really good secret agent! :D Great work man!

Irawan
06-28-2009, 07:15 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246169716_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246169716_medium.jpg)

small update,just collecting feedback from forum first and go further.thanks for critics,feedback and constructive comment.

Hamlet-ID
06-28-2009, 07:26 AM
One thing, the perspectic of the tawel machine in the left doesn't fit with the perspectiv of the bathroom. The bathroom is in a bottom point of view, while the towel machine is a top point of view.

ShogunWarrior
06-28-2009, 09:53 AM
hi heri,

great scene and story.. I love it, differen't from everyone that i have seen so far very funny as well. Can't wait to see this one completed jb, take care for now..

athanasy
06-28-2009, 11:09 AM
don't mean to be a pain in the a** and i could be wrong here , but these are some things i noticed at first glance.. thought they might be helpful...
In the image
http://i839.photobucket.com/albums/zz320/sachin_iyengar/corrections.jpg

1. the distance of the dispenser from the mirror does not seem to be accurate in the reflection.
2. the reflection of the female in the mirror doesn't seem to be perspectively right..
3. the lighting needs correction... needs to be a lot darker especially on the posterior area
4. the direction in which she's looking doesn't match the direction in which her gun is pointing
5. the bald man is looking towards the camera in the scene so technically his eyes wont be visible in the reflection.. the reflection should be more of the back of his head...

some other little things are the details on the dispenser and the fan ( seems a little hastily done) but all in all COMMENDABLE work... liked the feel of the scene...
keep up the good work... :thumbsup: hope the inputs are helpful...

Irawan
06-28-2009, 02:23 PM
hi luciano,thanks you i will working on it.
hi peter,thank you my friend.

Irawan
06-28-2009, 08:21 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246216907_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246216907_medium.jpg)

hi i just want to show the expression from two bad guys,is not finish yet.

what do you think? do you have some idea how can be better.

diissar
06-29-2009, 03:14 PM
Hi Irawan,nice idea,keep it up and good luck :D
for the characters expressions,i think it will be better if the guy the beard had he's eyes closed,to show he feels more pain(this is my opinion).

Lasphere
06-30-2009, 08:31 PM
hahaha I like it. The bald guy looks directly at her ... surprise. He must be scared.
Great job, maybe add a madd guy in the background vomiting or something. that would be great! ;D

irwit
06-30-2009, 08:55 PM
Great concept work, looking forward to seeing this progress

Good luck :thumbsup:

Irawan
06-30-2009, 11:17 PM
need input,critic or contructive comment
thanks a lot!

Meris
07-01-2009, 01:32 AM
I like your concept, but I might suggest making the hips a little smaller to stay with your transgender theme. It will hint a bit more at the idea of androgyny. Men have much smaller hip-to-waist ratios and while hormones and clothes and surgery can change a lot of other things, I think it's still exceedingly difficult for those who are genetically male to obtain hips wider than their shoulders.

The piece looks good aesthetically; I just found the big hips and behind really confusing in trying to figure out what was going on.

Besides that, great job! I love the other characters.

TheDeceit
07-01-2009, 04:45 AM
Looking at this makes me very uncomfortable. I like it!

miycko
07-01-2009, 08:44 AM
you have a great painting style and very interesting characters, even your rough sketch looks very detailed to me.

Irawan
07-01-2009, 10:43 AM
Hi Diissar,Thanks! i will try it.

Hi Lasphere, Vomitting?! i will thinking about,thanks!

Hi Irwit, Thanks!

Hi Meris, Thanks...There for i take the camera from down, i dont have to make the hips biggerr or the shoulder smaller.

Hi The deceit.Sorry for that feeling.Thanks!

Hi Mycko, Thank you so much!

Zazill8
07-01-2009, 01:00 PM
I like your concept, but I might suggest making the hips a little smaller to stay with your transgender theme. It will hint a bit more at the idea of androgyny. Men have much smaller hip-to-waist ratios and while hormones and clothes and surgery can change a lot of other things, I think it's still exceedingly difficult for those who are genetically male to obtain hips wider than their shoulders.

The piece looks good aesthetically; I just found the big hips and behind really confusing in trying to figure out what was going on.

Besides that, great job! I love the other characters.
I agree with Meris, you have a tough job here, you'll have to find a balance between a convincing female and some male anatomy, i think her/his hands are a tad small as well.

wick3dsono
07-01-2009, 04:04 PM
i don't really agree about the bald bad guy face. he's just look like not surprised seeing "it". hahahha. go go go!!

irwit
07-01-2009, 04:26 PM
Looking good, the man's face who it between the agents legs, I don't think his eyes should be looking at the agents "bits". I think it may look better if he is looking at the dead guys face in teh foreground. Just a thought anyway

ajitmenon
07-01-2009, 07:33 PM
wow! very cool ... and sexy!
great work! keep it coming!

Irawan
07-02-2009, 09:36 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246566975_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246566975_medium.jpg)

I thing i get closer,and thank you so much for all the great support.i love you!

cristinagar
07-02-2009, 09:49 PM
I think it's not that her hips are wide, it's her left buttcheek (can I say that? ;)) is lower and more prominent than her right one. With her colthes on is a lot less obvious, but still a little.

Either way, great job on the idea, the composition, and the rendering!

good luck

diissar
07-03-2009, 12:25 AM
Hi Irawan,how is it going??nice update bythe way,good luck with your painting process.

:wip:

ShogunWarrior
07-03-2009, 03:45 AM
hi heri,


You are working pretty hard on this concept. I am glad to see you are pulling all the stops on this one.. There are a lot of good secret agents in here but yours on top.. GOod design..Can't wait to see more, take care for now.

miycko
07-03-2009, 09:38 AM
your latest post is looking much cleaner and the lighting is great, the way the hair is cut looks a bit too straight though.

TyroneMaddams
07-03-2009, 10:44 AM
Looking great :)


- Ty

mantasim
07-03-2009, 11:36 AM
mmmmm sexy :D

Irawan
07-03-2009, 11:45 AM
hi everybody thank you!
you give me big support to finish this project.appreciated.

Irawan
07-04-2009, 01:25 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246710297_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1246710297_medium.jpg)

hi,i am working on detail right now,
please tell me if you fine something strange,input or any ideas.
thanks for your big support.
cheers

diissar
07-04-2009, 03:43 PM
hi Irawan,nice update!her hand(holding the gun)disturb me a little bit,maybe you can find a better way for her to hold the gun,as i said it disturb me just a little bit.Good luck my friend!by the way,congratulation for the award,i knew that you will get it for your nice octopus image.
i made another comp test,check my thread if you have free time

cheers

Popsaart
07-04-2009, 09:04 PM
looking good man!

Mayuresh-Salunke
07-06-2009, 06:28 AM
excellent work.

Rivenis
07-06-2009, 04:52 PM
ok, now this concept i like, he's a secret agent in more ways than one. I love everything about this, keep going

wick3dsono
07-06-2009, 06:04 PM
ow yeah. great detail! i like the reflection. keep it up

OZ
07-07-2009, 07:08 PM
OH MY!!!....... AMAZING!:argh:

Irawan
07-08-2009, 09:44 AM
hi diisar,thanks a lot,i will try it.
hi popsaart,thank you!
hi Mayuresh-Salunke, appreciated.
hi rivenis,i am happy if you like it.
hi wick3dsono,thanks,terimakasih!
hi oz,thank you my friend,cheers!

Light86
07-08-2009, 10:52 AM
Great image! Nice idea! haha

Maybe I have a critic but I'm not sure, I think maybe there's something strange about her bum, maybe too low or flat not sure haha.

Edit: I mean "his" bum lol.

kiboSVK
07-08-2009, 03:06 PM
perfect concepts and cool idea
Looking forward for your next update
Keep it

Ferx
07-09-2009, 02:05 AM
Hey Heri,

Really cool concept, like a lot the original approach !! great! :D
For the "girl" pose, I think you maybe can change a bit the hand with the weapon to read better the silhouette of the pistol, only a comment :) Great work and looking forward for more updates! Cheers!! :beer:

Terraplex
07-10-2009, 12:47 AM
I agree that the gun/hand needs a different pose, because it doesn't really look like it's pointing at the guy on the floor. I also don't know what to think about a mirror right above the urinals... I've been in plenty of bathrooms and none of them have a mirror for everyone to see your business. Looks great aside from my technical difficulties. :applause:

ShogunWarrior
07-10-2009, 01:31 AM
hey heri, I apologize for my last comment and I am sorry for everything i have said. Please excuse me and keep up the good work. I must have been in a bad mood that day and said some things i shouldn't have. You have great art skills and keep up the good work.

Irawan
07-12-2009, 10:47 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247435219_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247435219_medium.jpg)

hi everybody,thanks for great feedback or comment,i take away the big mirror infront of the toilet because it doesnt look realistic for the man toilet,i change it with shiny or reflective marble.
and also throw away the guy who sitting infront of her/he.
thank you!

Irawan
07-12-2009, 10:58 PM
hi peter,dont worry.
i have no problem with that.i like when people start to talk about what they like and what they doesnt like it.this help me a lot to find out the mistake or correction to get better quality,

you sad i should try something different,now i did, i hope you like my new layout/interior design of the toilet.

thanks a lot to all.
cheers

diissar
07-13-2009, 12:46 PM
hi Irawan,you are doing a pretty good job here!the guy in the forground(i suppose he is dead) is awesome.keep it up!!:applause:

Marat-Ars
07-13-2009, 01:04 PM
Well done) Nice idea

W-I-L
07-13-2009, 07:42 PM
havent seen this for a while.. coming along nicely. seems to me like there might be a slight perspective problem with the secret agent within the environment. maybe its just me.. but something doesnt look completely right. maybe the shoulder on the right should be higher if you know what i mean. cant pin point it.

ajitmenon
07-14-2009, 12:05 AM
Looking great! The agent looks sexy but I almost wish she weren't raising her skirt right next to the urinal.. perhaps? It kinda feels weird...
(gulp)
love the detailing though!

Light86
07-14-2009, 03:34 PM
Nice! Looks like you sorted out her/his bum! Good work.

Irawan
07-14-2009, 04:19 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247584752_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247584752_medium.jpg)

just small update.still far far away from finish.cheers

diissar
07-14-2009, 04:42 PM
hi Irawan,nice colors,your image is getting better and better!!

Irawan
07-14-2009, 10:43 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247607793_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247607793_medium.jpg)

another small update,the skin color test.

mic
07-14-2009, 11:13 PM
I like what you've with the hand. It looks so much better now. Everything else is looking great so far. Can't wait to see the finished piece.

Ferx
07-14-2009, 11:29 PM
Hey Heri,

Looking really great !! like the green-yellow tone for the ambient light, cool touch!, About your interrogation marks :) Maybe the square mirror in post 110 works better tan the circular one. You have a lot of curves ( the "girl" of course, and many corpses :D) and a some straight lines, like the square mirror, can help to mantain the balance of the composition. The towel dispenser is not bad but is out of the perspective. Like the pose for the hand with the gun. Maybe you can mantain the background of the post #110, without the lamps on the ceiling, I prefer the lighting lamp on your last image :) The skin color test looks nice. Only a large comment!! :) Great work!! Cheers!! :beer:

Terraplex
07-15-2009, 03:37 AM
Dang! It just gets better and better. I love it so far. Great work with everything.

Irawan
07-15-2009, 08:34 AM
hi Michor,Thanks!
hi fernando, thanks a lot for your time and constructive comment, i am happy to get comment and feedback from you,cheers
hi sam,thank you!

Levan
07-15-2009, 09:37 AM
Hi,


Your work is my favorite!



Very funny and very, very sexy agent :) Keep it up!

walrus
07-15-2009, 03:02 PM
It's looking nice! I think you could add more volume to the folds in the cloth, especially the ones above the secret agent's right hand, where they would bunch up and be thicker, not so flat and smooth against the body. As for color schemes, I hope you'll keep experimenting. An all-yellow scene set in a bathroom - the two aren't a very, um, appetizing color scheme. Maybe you could try something cool that the agent's warm skin tones would stand out against? (And blood could too - I keep looking at this and wondering where the blood is? I mean at least 4 guys have just been shot!) Good luck! :thumbsup:

creepingtograve
07-15-2009, 03:47 PM
great sketches, love the situation that is told, this kind of man-woman-agent idea is really funny.....hope to see more....keep it up

Irawan
07-16-2009, 11:14 AM
hi leven,thanks i am happy you like it.
hi walrus,thanks a lot for your contructive comment.
...the blood? i am still thinking about that.at least i will try it.
hi creepingtograve, thanks! sure you will see more.cheers

JiDy
07-17-2009, 03:23 PM
I like her legs :)
good details work and nice colors.

My challenge post (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?postid=5988383#post5988383)

jonathanclark
07-17-2009, 05:53 PM
That is one HOT man. Errr woman. Nice skin shading. Very impressive.

aghill
07-17-2009, 06:13 PM
just wanted to throw in a "good job!" cool progress so far! Love it. Its cool with the changed camera-angle. The shading of the girl is very good!

Irawan
07-18-2009, 05:12 AM
hi JiDy,jonathanclark,aghill Thanks!

Irawan
07-18-2009, 09:57 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247950657_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247950657_medium.jpg)

just finish black and white,tomorrow i will start with coloring.
cc are always welcome.
cheers.heri

Ferx
07-18-2009, 10:24 PM
Hey Heri,

That perspective and lighting looks really cool! :D The new towel dispenser match perfect with the bathroom style and perspective, cool touch! Like the square mirror too :D.
Maybe you can remove the arm in the left (of the guy that reflects on the mirror), the reflection is enough to know that is a guy in there, I think that hand distracts a bit the attention on the whole image and action. Only a comment. Really great work!! Cheers!! :beer:

Irawan
07-19-2009, 08:10 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247987406_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247987406_medium.jpg)

this is the color version,thanks ferx for your input.

Irawan
07-19-2009, 08:11 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247987496_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247987496_medium.jpg)

the second one

Irawan
07-19-2009, 10:05 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247987496_medium.jpg


http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247994342_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1247994342_medium.jpg)

i try to make quick sketch for the foreground(action)
have a look the earlier version,what do you think?
thanks,heri

Srulik24
07-19-2009, 01:56 PM
your piece looks amazing!
I have to admit that I love the version without the gangster in the front but that's my humble opinion

CyrilJEDOR
07-19-2009, 02:48 PM
To begin i love your picture. it's fun! ^^
I prefer the version without the character on the front for tow reason. The first because we don't understand who kill him, the second because he hide a big part of the picture. I see your idea and it's true it can be a way to close the picture and refine the composition. So you can make little part of a plant?

Except that GJ! ;)

walrus
07-19-2009, 02:53 PM
Hi, Heri, the detailing is looking nice. I don't think that the man in the front is necessary at all. You don't need a frame, as without him it's still totally clear where the focus of the picture is. And it's confusing to see him falling like he's been shot when it's clear that the agent's attention is elsewhere. Works better without, imho.

One other note: I like the idea of bulletholes in the wall, but the holes themselves look like metal in what's clearly a marble wall (or at least marble-tiled.) Might want to do some more research on how stone would behave when hit by bullets - I'd have expected a spiderweb pattern of cracks and major chunks chipping off.

Good luck - looking great! :thumbsup:

deftsword
07-19-2009, 02:53 PM
I also prefer the one without the front gangster.
But if you go with the second one you might like to rethink the bullet ,
usually only the front part of it is coming out the gun :surprised

Irawan
07-19-2009, 05:30 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1248021045_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1248021045_medium.jpg)

everything happening in a really highspeed,and i think thats possible.

Irawan
07-19-2009, 05:45 PM
hi Srulik24,thanks a lot, i will try both and at the end will chose one.

hi CyrilJEDOR, thank you for your time,i think thats possible(i make his hair moved). the bandit always move slower then the main actor.

hi walrus,thank you so much for your constructive comment,how about now?
do you think still better without him(foreground),
i just make his hair moved, he doesnt have to pay attention to the guys which's agony.
thanks a lot for your other note,i think it look bettter now.

hi deftsword,thanks a lot,and thanks for the bullet info.

wick3dsono
07-19-2009, 08:24 PM
nice job irawan! the last post is disturbing. the man in foreground mess the composition, also the bullet and its trail. it;s a static scene i think, so i dont really agree about bullet. but you can add more blood splat or bullet hole on the wall. maybe broke the sink. just make it mess. but no active flying bullet.IMHO.

diissar
07-19-2009, 11:32 PM
Hi Heri,really nice update,i agree with the others,the guy in the foreground distract a little bit,if you wanna keep him,try another pose,maybe you can show him from bottom angle,only his leg or something like that,other than that its really nice!!
good luck
cheers

Ferx
07-20-2009, 01:41 AM
Hey Heri,

The color palette looks cool, nice lighting mood. I like the bullet holes in the wall, nice touch fort the drama in your image.
Think the composition without the man in front works better :) If you want gun shot action in your concept, you can use the man on the floor behind the sink, firing to the secret agent, with that you can focus the action and the composition. I Think you are concerned a bit of all the "air" in the upper left part of your image, maybe you can crop the upper part a bit or yo can put a surveillance camera in that part... I dont know, only a silly idea:) Good work!! Cheers!! :beer:

Irawan
07-20-2009, 06:41 AM
hi wick3dsono,thanks!the blood on the wall is not really logic because he is standing overthere,otherweis he is dead.

hi diissar,i have tried already but it doesnt look good.probably it really not neccesery to put the foreground because i also like the static atmosfer.

hi ferx,good input,i will try it.thank you!

cheers.heri

Rivenis
07-20-2009, 09:13 PM
yeah i'm gonna have to go with the majority here in saying that the composition without the foreground thug is much stronger, it ruins the focus of the image and weakens it alot to me. Anyway this is looking awesome so far, keep going

ajitmenon
07-20-2009, 10:04 PM
I agree too... the foreground thug is cool but messes too much with the compo... it's looking great in color though.
Here's to you finishing off well!

cheers!
Ajit

PS: oh and I'd love some feedback on my challenge too if you have the time.

Irawan
07-20-2009, 11:07 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1248127677_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1248127677_medium.jpg)

here is some close up and detail

Irawan
07-20-2009, 11:10 PM
here is the last update.
http://www.heriirawan.com/CG_Forum/SA_Test_Color_5a_Irawan.jpg

Rivenis
07-20-2009, 11:59 PM
awesome work heri, this is a real contender. I have one suggestion though, perhaps you could add some smoke to the bullet holes in the wall to give the idea that they are fresh, anyway, great work

Irawan
07-21-2009, 06:13 AM
thanks for your input.i still have to work on the detail right now and think what is still necessery to be there.
input,feedback,comment,tips and critics will help me a lot.thanks in edvanced.

TyroneMaddams
07-21-2009, 06:59 AM
Looking beautiful my friend, i love it!!

Personally i would love a tiny bit of blood coming from either the mouth or ear of one of the dead foreground characters, nice and subtle amount (Guy closest to camera on lower left side looks like his ear is perfect for some blood, suggesting to the viewer he got a nice shot in the back of head/neck) :)


- Ty

Irawan
07-21-2009, 09:13 AM
hi TyroneMaddams.
thanks a lot for taking time visiting my thread,i will try to do it.do you enter the challange as well?

Neubius
07-21-2009, 09:52 AM
woah !

i go away for five minutes and you've finished !! :D
absolutely wicked mate, looks fantastic! Ithink you're right leaving the foreground( shooting dude ) out.
great work man :)
A

ShogunWarrior
07-21-2009, 09:55 AM
Heri,

Hi man, your work is amazing. I noticed you did a lot of changes to this piece of work and I love it! This is a masterpiece at its best. Love the tiling or granite walls. I have suggestion, try a lower resolution of the characters face on the granite but make it a blur.. Gaussan Blur.. just enough to see some face then fade it back a little, try it and lets see. Everything else looks perfect. I will try to help more tomorrow, take care for now.

Lasphere
07-21-2009, 10:20 AM
YaaaaY Vomiting guy! (who's dead)

I love the image.

diissar
07-21-2009, 11:19 AM
Hi Heri,really nice job my friend!!the image is way better now
for the critiques,i think the blood on the guy next the agent,looks a little bit fake,blood on a dark suits will look darker i think,try to see a reference.
really nice work again,good luck,you are almost done

Irawan
07-21-2009, 11:55 AM
hi neubius,thank you,yes i work on the detail first,we will see if i still have time left i still want to try to make the foreground as well.is not for 5 minutes...you ware away for 1months i guest.

ShogunWarrior. thanks for your tips,for the focus and out focus i will do it at the end if everything is done.

hi Lasphere,thank you!

hi diissar, yes you are totaly right!i will try to make different.thanks!

Imara
07-21-2009, 01:19 PM
Hey Heri. I was just browsing through and this one caught my eye. I love the lighten and the texture of the tiles. But i can tell you one thing from this piece. She must be one bad ass lady. Nice work man. Looking forward to the final piece.

aghill
07-21-2009, 01:31 PM
Hi.

I love the progress. Really good stuff man!

I have some stuff to point out though. When I look at the general composition, the roof disturbes me a little bit. The small lamps in the upper left corner of the picture is annoying and distracting I think. Making the roof a without the lamps and softly fading to dark toward the left corner would make a more "pressing mood" I think. Furthermore The big lamps might be a little too bright, but im not sure.

Furthermore, the line of the womans arm, and the guy on the floor should be much more "tight". Here is the tension. I think she should point at his head, instead of his elbow, and I think you could go a little more over the top on his facial expression. Him holding a gun beside his head is a bit weird too. I would like him to be more helpless. I think the line of action should be Shoulder - Gun - Head.

Anyways.. just some thoughts.

Keep up your butkicking awsomeness man!:beer:

-Thomas.

Irawan
07-21-2009, 03:18 PM
hi imara,thanks!

hi thomas,thanks for a good tips i will try it.

fabmoraes
07-21-2009, 08:03 PM
Hi, there.
You did a great work here. The idea is very clear and can be understood instantly. Also, it is very funny, the girl/guy killed everyone with he/her "gun".

I have no critics, only compliments. Excellent use of colors as well.

Best of luck for you.

marianof83
07-22-2009, 01:25 AM
You just can´t stop adding details!:applause:

This is High quality stuff.;)

marianof83

CyrilJEDOR
07-22-2009, 01:53 AM
Nice details. love bullets hole and destroy box, and good picture of the first man ^^ great quality don't stop there!

Meris
07-22-2009, 02:03 AM
WOW! I haven't looked at this in a while and it looks fantastic with all the detailing you've added! I love her dress.

nemotoad
07-22-2009, 09:33 AM
Thank you for the kind words, I've followed your entry from the start. It's comforting to know you like my work too.

-CS

Ykay
07-22-2009, 01:29 PM
Beautiful !!! I like a lot your style, and she's so sexy :bowdown:

Irawan
07-22-2009, 08:11 PM
hi Ostertag Stéphane,thanks!

hi Christian Shoup,sure! your work is great.

hi Stephanie Maulding,good to hear you like her dress.

hi Cyril Jedor,thanks,yes i am now working for the details.

hi Lomas de Zamora,yeah i still have 17days from now - 1 week holliday(finaly)

Hi, there.
You did a great work here. The idea is very clear and can be understood instantly. Also, it is very funny, the girl/guy killed everyone with he/her "gun".

I have no critics, only compliments. Excellent use of colors as well.

Best of luck for you.

hi Fabricio Moraes,thank you for the kind words,
thanks for your time to see my thread and giving me more power.

one more time from me,congratulation for your steampunk! you are the master.
cheers.heri

cristinagar
07-22-2009, 10:54 PM
Great job!

your image is really strong and the story is clear as it can be. I love the detail you have added lately, especially the dress and the marble wall with its holes

one thing, though. I don't know if this has been pointed out before, but the mirror is reflecting things that are not there. In my opinion there is no way the door and that man could be so far away from the mirror to be out of the frame, and still be reflected where they are. If you look at the reflection of the ceiling lights (which seem correctly placed to me), the door is halway under the light, and that's where it should be in the non-reflected wall. Same with the man (although that could be a little trickier depending on how far he is from the back wall). Right now the mirror looks more like some kind of window to me... (I hope you understand what I mean, excuse my poor wording...)

keep it up! this is one of the stongest entries, in my opinion :)

humandesignlab
07-23-2009, 04:51 AM
Heri,

I'm speechless! The level of detail you are achieving is great! Much for me to learn from you.

Keep it up!

Irawan
07-23-2009, 07:09 AM
hi cristina,thanks,i know that i am trying hard at the moment to get really good final result.

hi Humberto,yes we all learn from this challenge,it good training,good people here.good luck!

mechaniac
07-23-2009, 08:32 AM
holeymoley... christiangar is totaly right.. the reflection is not working.
but your artwork is really getting somewhere! love how you did the skin on the dead guy! this will be geat!

wick3dsono
07-23-2009, 05:02 PM
your last updates is very great. like the detail, mostly the broken hand dryer. i'll update mine soon. still have more work to do.

SuperMario
07-23-2009, 09:55 PM
Fantastic! I know everyone is saying it, but great secret agent, he looks hot!

i3abden
07-24-2009, 01:51 AM
Wow, your work is amazing... looking forward to your next input :D

dingwang6
07-24-2009, 02:43 AM
really nice drawing!

Irawan
07-24-2009, 07:27 PM
hi mechaniac,SuperMario,i3abden,dingwang6 thanks a lot!cheers

Marat-Ars
07-24-2009, 09:43 PM
like color...dead faces really good drawing...nice mimics ;) GL!

wick3dsono
07-27-2009, 04:51 PM
are you final?? or you still workin on it?

DarwinsMishap
07-27-2009, 07:41 PM
The progress in your piece has been astounding! I love your guy/gal-great work in the idea, posing, color AND lighting!

A unique, and fresh idea!! Great work in the details as well- can't wait to see the final! :thumbsup:

Irawan
07-30-2009, 09:27 AM
hi Marat-Ars,thanks!
hi wick3dsono, not yet.i will continue this weekend.
hi DarwinsMishap.thanks a lot!

Randis
07-30-2009, 03:23 PM
Looks cool! A very dangerous ladyboy!

Wish you good luck for the challenge!

I finished working on the conceptart org challenge, now entered here too.

Irawan
08-01-2009, 08:08 PM
hi randis,thanks!i am happy you like it.

rashi
08-02-2009, 04:16 PM
wow dude really awesome stuff i think you will surely win,wish you good luck man

Irawan
08-03-2009, 08:56 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249286163_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249286163_medium.jpg)

hi everybody finaly i got time to continue on the weekend!

cc are most welcome
cheers.heri

Irawan
08-03-2009, 08:57 AM
some details/close up here:


http://www.heriirawan.com/CG_Forum/detail_face_closeup.jpg

Irawan
08-03-2009, 09:01 AM
wow dude really awesome stuff i think you will surely win,wish you good luck man

thank you for your kind words! cheers heri

diissar
08-03-2009, 09:26 AM
Hi Heri,its been a while since your last post,great progress your image is awesome
check my thread i finished my image!
good luck my friend!!!

wick3dsono
08-03-2009, 09:28 AM
wow, great detail. i can't talk more.

Irawan
08-03-2009, 10:52 AM
hi younes and louis,thanks.
cheers.heri

Neubius
08-03-2009, 11:10 AM
Awesome!
you finished ?
:)
good luck dude

Irawan
08-03-2009, 11:12 AM
thanks! not yet.

JJP3D1
08-03-2009, 01:24 PM
This one is definitely putting pressure on all of us. Great Work!

deleteduser
08-03-2009, 02:09 PM
:applause:
I love the "oh shit" moment
great work anyway, good luck

Irawan
08-03-2009, 02:59 PM
hi Isuardi,thanks!
yes!you are right.

rawgon
08-03-2009, 03:19 PM
Irawan

I really like the outcome of your concept, i think its a very beautiful painting.
You say is not finished, but is already looking very polished! good luck in your final details.

Wish you all the best for the challenge:)

Randis
08-03-2009, 03:30 PM
this looks great, good job man!

here a couple of my thought:

- would reduce the whites on the agents skin, the lighting isn't that bright and whites always male the skin look burned out.

- could try to make some different color variations. now you have green/yellow.
could reduce yellow value a bit, add more blue for example and see how that looks like, cool down the image a bit.

The thing is i think that dark glossy stones always look more brilliant and crisp with colder light. what you have is a very warm light there.
i like the colors tho!

The skin could use a bit wider color range, right now its all yellow and green, even in with warm light human skin has more shades of color.


the face of the guy on the right side could use some more work, the feel isn't 100% right, something about the shadows and proportions is a bit off. I think the eye on the right is a bit to deep, would move it a bit to the right and slightly higher maybe, you should rotate the image when you work, will be easier to see whats wrong. his upper lip is kinda dark too.

after so many shots everything is stil so clean, i would add some dust and small debris on the 2 guys on the floor. and some more blood on the walls.

The ceiling could use some more details, you have a fairly large brown area there with no details or structure.

the stone tiles on the wall could use some vertical cuts, tho much tinner than the horizontal cuts so the image does not look busy, the reason for that is that there are no such huge stone plates you would use to make a toilet wall.

I like the subtle blue light on the characters tho i don't see where it comes from.
Having a dark floor it must be reflective because black does not emit much bouncing light.
the light is blue tho but the light source is yellow.

what could give the image some nice contrast and color is when you would add a new lightsource here, a brighter baby blue light that comes from the door. you would see the bright light behint the guy in the reflection and it would affect the area around the sink and the guy with the weapon in his hand, maybe some interesting shadows too.

Hope some of it will be of any help to you

Good luck!
cheers!

Irawan
08-03-2009, 04:15 PM
hi rawgon, thanks! nice to know you.and see your work.

hi randis,thank you very much! that's really great input.
i will playing a lot with the color and see what is the best result.i am doing the ceiling right now and looking for the best posibility.thanks for your tips "rotate the canvas"
regards.
heri

ajitmenon
08-03-2009, 05:53 PM
it's finishing up nicely!
I must say it's been a pleasure following your thread... it's aweosme to see good 2d work develop slowly from basic colour fill in to final detailing!
Great job again!

Irawan
08-03-2009, 06:33 PM
hi Ajit Menon, thanks for your kind words!

wick3dsono
08-04-2009, 04:44 PM
hei irawan, its already week-middle. any updates, final maybe??

check out my thread, i;m already update. need any/many advice.

Irawan
08-04-2009, 06:11 PM
hi louis, i will update soon!

Pencracker
08-04-2009, 07:23 PM
Amazing work! I can't wait to see your final image!! :applause:

Ferx
08-04-2009, 10:45 PM
Hey Heri,

Really great :D Your concept looks totally awesome! Like a lot the color palette on it. Maybe a some of the blue light from the floor can be over the agent legs and body, and perhaps the man with the gun can show the other hand in a surrender attitude ... only silly ideas, don´t listent to me :D Awesome work !! Waiting for the final image :D Cheers!! :beer:

Irawan
08-04-2009, 11:24 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249424647_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249424647_medium.jpg)

hi everybody,
here is my update:
work a lot with their faces,experiment or try another colors,work with ceiling,make the mirror a bit dirty(finger print),add blue light from the open door/outside,etc.

....another input?
the next update is final.

thanks to all!

cheers.heri

Irawan
08-04-2009, 11:27 PM
here is the bigger one.

http://www.heriirawan.com/CG_Forum/050809_secret_agent_heri_irawan.jpg


cc are most welcome

shihar
08-05-2009, 01:48 AM
you are the best really nice. i know a winner when i see one :thumbsup:

I just want to say that I kind of like the previous lighting and the ceiling I think you'd better get some opinions from others.

good luck buddy

Irawan
08-05-2009, 06:27 AM
hi lakmal,thanks,cheers.heri

Irawan
08-05-2009, 06:33 AM
hi fernando,thanks a lot for the input!the next update is final, i just have to make a list,which part are still need to work over.

Irawan
08-05-2009, 07:37 AM
hi rachel,thanks!

here is the bigger one.

http://www.heriirawan.com/CG_Forum/050809_secret_agent_heri_irawan.jpg


cc are most welcome

FalyneVarger
08-05-2009, 07:37 AM
The blue lighting is a nice tough.

gedomenas
08-05-2009, 02:13 PM
Very nice job Irawan good luck for you, glad you finished.

rawgon
08-05-2009, 02:55 PM
Irawan,

You did good in breaking the wall tiles and also like the color shift.
Go for the final!

Later

Renderspud
08-05-2009, 04:41 PM
This is such a disturbing image to me:eek: You've broken sooooo many politically correct themes... GOOD JOB!!

Everytime I look at it I get this funny feeling inside. Is it the girl in the men's bathroom?... the people laying on the bacteria-laden floor?... the dead guy with his head in the urinal?... the girl peeing standing up?... or is it that the 'she' is an extremely effeminate 'he' with really nice curves and soft suptle skin... now I feel funny again. DOH!

Great Job!! This one definately sticks with ya...:applause:

wick3dsono
08-05-2009, 04:51 PM
irawan, i;m already update again. check it out. i have no word again for you. lol.

DarwinsMishap
08-05-2009, 04:51 PM
Don't think I have any crits here; the difference between this last post and the last one I looked at three pages ago is phenominal.

A-waitin' the Final! :bounce: :thumbsup: :buttrock:

Irawan
08-05-2009, 09:07 PM
hi FalyneVarger,yes.i like the color better then before.thanks

hi imperioli thanks!

hi rawgon,thanks my friend, i was enjoy following your thread.

hi Renderspud,i was loughing when i was reading your feedback.thanks man!

hi wick3dsono,ooh....!i like your new update

hi DarwinsMishap,thanks!the final image will come soon!

cheers.heri

hardloader
08-05-2009, 09:21 PM
hey Heri...I just spotted something. Theres a hand print I suppose next to the exit door and its reflected in the mirror!? If thats with some kind of purpose excuse me. Otherwise deffinetly admiring your work and wish you good luck :)
Stefan

Irawan
08-05-2009, 09:32 PM
hi stefan,the handprints is not reflected in the mirror,but directly on the mirror,
what do you think?.......thanks!

chilombiano
08-06-2009, 02:24 AM
oH Irawan. great work! the last CC gives it a nice mood!
good luck

hardloader
08-06-2009, 04:42 AM
Now that is something else :) sorry...but another thing: the vertical gaps of the wall seems like are not reflected. That is final ..you wont here from me anymore :)
Cheers!

ajitmenon
08-06-2009, 04:53 AM
Very cool! Great job finishing this! Good luck with the contest part!

Norberg
08-06-2009, 07:35 AM
Cool image!
I noticed that the lightramp doesn´t follow the perspective though.
If i knew how to insert an image to this post I would show you :)
Just compare to the lines on the wall and you´ll see.

Irawan
08-06-2009, 08:26 AM
hi chilombiano,thanks my friends.

hi hardloader,thanks, i forgot about that.thanks a lot to remind me.

hi ajimenon, thank you!

hi Norberg,yes! i know what you means,i will fix it.thanks for that.

CyrilJEDOR
08-06-2009, 12:47 PM
Hey good job your blue lighting is very nice, i love it! Your details are really great.

if you have 5 minutes i have some difficulties to choose a final concept, can you help me please? thanks! ;)

spottyspotty
08-06-2009, 08:52 PM
Wow! What an amazing artwork! :applause: It shows you as a great and professional artist with a huge sence of humor!! :) I like your artwork very much!!

marianof83
08-06-2009, 11:42 PM
your work is outstanding!
I like the texture details and the light effects you added to the image. Those elements take the quality of your work to another level.
congratulations!
and good luck!:applause:

marianof83

snake08
08-07-2009, 05:09 AM
Damn.. awesome finish Irawan, man you're sitting on top of the competition, how does it feel up there? lol seriously though, amazing stuff, best of luck.:buttrock:

Irawan
08-07-2009, 07:50 AM
hi everybody,
thanks for support.
cheers.heri

http://www.heriirawan.com/CG_Forum/070809_secret_agent_heri_irawan.jpg

dogaweb
08-07-2009, 08:55 AM
Hello Heri Irawan, very nice image, work beautiful.
The idea is most original
good luck

thanks comments in my image "Secret Agent"
My final Image SECRET AGENT (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=291&t=779645)
www.dogaweb.com.br (http://www.dogaweb.com.br/)

Irawan
08-07-2009, 12:17 PM
hi douglas,thanks for your feedback!

diissar
08-07-2009, 12:21 PM
Hi Irawan,congratulations!!!good luck my friend!
check my final image if you didn't see it

take care

Pencracker
08-07-2009, 12:46 PM
Hey Irawan, you've really done an impressive job!! :) all in your image are complemented very well in many ways, I give you my congratulations. . I hope see you as winner!
Thanks for this stunning artwork and good luck!

<edit>
I Just want to comment one thing if it's not too late: it is about the hip of the main character. I draw some lines to explain me better, I hope you don't mind

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4021/guygal.jpg

wick3dsono
08-07-2009, 12:57 PM
final already!? congratz irawan. wish you luck! no no, you dont need any luck, i think you deserve the podium. hahah.

Irawan
08-07-2009, 04:16 PM
hi younes,thanks!
hi ignacio,thanks for your input,i see what you means. i already think about that, i will change a litle bit but not to much like your sketch.
hi louis, "luck"i always need it.

deftsword
08-07-2009, 06:20 PM
Very nice concept and nice skin texture, I like the twist of it to. Good luck.

Irawan
08-07-2009, 08:10 PM
hi Michel,thanks!cheers.

Irawan
08-08-2009, 11:25 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249727105_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249727105_medium.jpg)

Software: Photoshop

Since the militer has taken over the country the voice of the people has become smaller and smaller. Although they try to fight the corrupt regime with demonstrations there is no chance for the people anymore to change the situation because nobody can proof the incorrect wheelings and dealings of the militer. so the last chance is to send a secret agent who has to find the clear evidence of the corrupt behaviour of the regime.
For this purpose they are sending a guy who is able to work undercover either as a man or woman. When he(she) is invited to accompany the general to a big militer gathering, he´s finally able to get an evidence for the corrupt ways of the militer from three military men whom he finally kills in the toilet where there is no camera surveillance.
After feeling already safe he´s having a piss when suddenly more militer is entering the toilet...

Nymuh
08-08-2009, 11:47 AM
Roar Love it! Funny theme! excellent compositing!

Good job! :applause:

*Yeh my fist post* :bounce:

diissar
08-08-2009, 11:54 AM
Hi,Heri finaly you finished your image,congratulation again and good luck my friend!!!
:applause:

Irawan
08-08-2009, 11:57 AM
Latest Update: Final Image: After feeling safe
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/24/17724/17724_1249727105_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=6032794#post6032794)


Since the militer has taken over the country the voice of the people has become smaller and smaller. Although they try to fight the corrupt regime with demonstrations there is no chance for the people anymore to change the situation because nobody can proof the incorrect wheelings and dealings of the militer. so the last chance is to send a secret agent who has to find the clear evidence of the corrupt behaviour of the regime.
For this purpose they are sending a guy who is able to work undercover either as a man or woman. When he(she) is invited to accompany the general to a big militer gathering, he´s finally able to get an evidence for the corrupt ways of the militer from three military men whom he finally kills in the toilet where there is no camera surveillance.
After feeling already safe he´s having a piss when suddenly more militer is entering the toilet...


Special thanks for the input to:

My wife(Sabine)
Randis Albion
Michael Dashow
Björn Norberg
Fernando Porcel
Younes Elharoussi
Christof Stanits
Tyrone Maddams
Ignacio Fernandez Rios
Stefan hardloader
Louis Lugas Wicaksono
Peter Nguyen
Thomas Haas-Christensen
Sam Brickey
Michor Lu
Sachin N Iyengar
Stephanie Maulding
William james Hallett
Cyril Jedor
Michel de Longue-Epee
Andrew Blackman



Thanks for the Feedback to:

Fabricio Moraes
Gonçalo Pereira
Michael Ulrich
Rachel Finley
S. Clark
Julien Lambé
Carl Linné
Alessandro Lima
Tom
Rishikesh Nandlaskar
Sean Hong
Daniel Merkel
Joseph Harford
Trung Le
George Huszar
Mats Minnhagen
Imara Sargeant
Felix Lahme
Kerem Gogus
tonytrout
Nino Junghans
Alwyn Talbot
Michael See
smallone3d
William james Hallett
Carl Linné
nirupama francis
William Zazill
Diogo Gaudencio
Jack Oakman
Ding Wang
Craig Bruyn
Jorge Lescale
Robet Xu
Stanimira Stoeva
Kory Heinzen
Paul Bush
Humberto Mangino
Luciano Arcuri
Lasse Rützou Bruntse
William Elliott
Andrew E.
Chritinagar
Michael Kalimukwa
Mantas Sim
Pappy Onwuagbu
Andrew Blackman
Jay Barrios
Isuardi Therianto
Fabio Oscar Corica
light86
Tomas Slobodnik
Marat ars
Pawel Lewandowski
Jean-Denis Coindre
Jonathan Clark
Imara Sargeant
Mariano fernandez
Christian Shoup
Ostertag Stéphane
cristina
Mario Perry
Mostafa Nassar
Daniel Bayona
Larissa Kuznetsova
Douglas Souza

and everybody in the Forum
Thanks to CGTALK for the contest!
good luck to all of you,
cheers.heri

Irawan
08-08-2009, 01:16 PM
close_up

http://www.heriirawan.com/CG_Forum/CU01_After_feeling_save_Irawan.jpg

CyrilJEDOR
08-08-2009, 01:32 PM
Congratulation irawan! ^^ good work. May the Force be with you. Good luck! ^^

Irawan
08-08-2009, 05:41 PM
Hi Nymuh,Diissar and CyrilJEDOR thanks for your support.

RicGuimm
08-08-2009, 05:53 PM
Wow!!! He's a master of disguise!!! Cool idea!

Irawan
08-08-2009, 06:46 PM
yes you are right!thanks man.

MartinNielsen
08-08-2009, 10:33 PM
That's a very cool final :thumbsup:

yakonusuke
08-08-2009, 10:40 PM
Hehe, yes this is a real SECRET agent. Congrats! Good job!

mechaniac
08-08-2009, 10:43 PM
stunning final image heri! very well done!
dig the concept so much and I love how you paint your characters skin! just perfect!
all the best!
christof