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summeralive
07-23-2003, 08:43 AM
:rolleyes:

this is the sketching done in Jan2003:

just wanna to hear more commend from all of you guys!
my website will be seen soon!
:blush:





www.geocities.com/summergeogie

Tephlon
07-23-2003, 11:13 AM
I'll just give you some crits before you reply to yourself again. ;)

The girl looks well done. Did you have a photo reference? The picture is a bit small but the light/shadow play looks nice.

The portrait shot of the guy looks a lot more interesting. Another Photoref? Here too, the picture is a bit too small to give good crits. Was this done in pencil? Charcoal? If so you need to put a fixative (?) on it to preserve your drawings.

All in all, if you want critiques, you should make your scans (or are they taken with a digital cam?) bigger.

summeralive
07-23-2003, 02:29 PM
:)

thank 4 the comment!...... ill repost it in a bigger one!
by the way, it is done by Pencil!

:D

singleguy
07-23-2003, 02:58 PM
not bad. The whole composition looks quite balanced up.. but whats wrong with the two human figures at the back? Scanning error?
Why dont you post something in color? It will be nice...:beer:

Tephlon
07-23-2003, 04:57 PM
Not bad at all. the Pavarotti one is especially nice. Could you give us some closeups of his face? (I just don't like the 2 faces top right in that one)

nice work

VGTsXVII
07-25-2003, 01:25 AM
I really don't know much about drawing so i can't give you any advices...

but i can tell you: those pictures are really nice.

especially pavarotti look beautiful and has a lot of details.

good work!! :beer:

summeralive
07-26-2003, 02:43 PM
thank so much 4 all the feedback guys!
hope to see more feed back from all user.......


:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

Witchy
07-26-2003, 03:25 PM
This is what you post to everyone else;

..good try!
..try to put more time on ur work!
..take care the details!

It would help if you offered some constructive comments imho as that sort of comment (in almost every thread) is not really very helpful. And to be honest it's almost spam.

Your images are interesting and balanced but they are not being shown off as well as they might be. Try having less things crowded together, and perhaps add a simple frame or background to each.

summeralive
08-04-2003, 09:50 AM
TO ALL THE DG14STUDENT..........................
WHERE R UR POST?????????????????????





:shame: :shame: :shame: :shame: :

singleguy
08-04-2003, 10:02 AM
i think its time for you to change your thread.. post something new. Don't you think so?:wise:

top 10
08-23-2003, 02:33 AM
:lightbulb

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