Bathroom Scene

[d8ed]

alright here we go. i'm very blunt so don't get mad. =)

your proportions seem way off. the ceiling light looks too big.. so do the faucet handles.. they're longer than your deodorant stick.. your sink looks too narrow and has a lip that seems way too high.

the wood texture seems too big as well.. and the doors to the cabinet seem too thick. flatten them out a bit and give them harder corners and maybe recess them into the cabinet itself.

the shower stall doors and the mirror look to have the same amount of reflection. personally i'd use hazy whatever it's called glass for the shower doors.

the flooring seems very odd.. looks like a very large canvas texture. is it supposed to be carpet? since this whole thing looks like a 70's bathroom maybe it's supposed to be shag. not sure. but it doesnt work yet.

consider making the glass bowl surrounding your ceiling light translucent white rather than transparent glass.

and lots of your edges seem way too hard. try beveling the wall corners and just about anything else that has a hard edge.

oh and your towel rack in the reflection isnt casting a shadow for some reason. good luck. should have enough to work on for now. =)

[wedge]

i agree!

and i also think your sink handles look like dildos.

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