WKTURNER
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ivanisavich
06-07-2009, 01:03 AM
edit: mmmm...think I was a bit too harsh ;)
Just keep practicing mate.
Just keep practicing mate.
aesir
06-07-2009, 01:27 AM
First off, I recomend everyone watch this film. It was trippy as hell.
My thoughts, overall plot: nonsensical. I don't know what happened, but I'm still trying to figure it out. I feel like you have some very deep themes running as an undercurrent to your piece. The woman in the park in her nightie. The homeless men by the barrel that she was both confused and distracted by. The man on the bench (a ghost perhaps?). The strange sexual energy that erupted when she straddled the fatter man. The knowing smirk the ghost gave at the end to the camera, as though he knew I was pondering his very smirk's meaning. The animation occasionally skipped, as though time was in flux. Or perhaps a glitch of some sort of matrix that we are all in. I was drawn in.
as far as ivanisavich's comment that you should be better by your second year.... I've seen worse from seniors. He probably just went to a really good school. Or is used to the people on the net. But he is right that you've got a long ways to go before you get anywhere near good enough to get a job. I think you should go back to the basics.
My thoughts, overall plot: nonsensical. I don't know what happened, but I'm still trying to figure it out. I feel like you have some very deep themes running as an undercurrent to your piece. The woman in the park in her nightie. The homeless men by the barrel that she was both confused and distracted by. The man on the bench (a ghost perhaps?). The strange sexual energy that erupted when she straddled the fatter man. The knowing smirk the ghost gave at the end to the camera, as though he knew I was pondering his very smirk's meaning. The animation occasionally skipped, as though time was in flux. Or perhaps a glitch of some sort of matrix that we are all in. I was drawn in.
as far as ivanisavich's comment that you should be better by your second year.... I've seen worse from seniors. He probably just went to a really good school. Or is used to the people on the net. But he is right that you've got a long ways to go before you get anywhere near good enough to get a job. I think you should go back to the basics.
WKTURNER
06-07-2009, 09:35 AM
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skunk184
06-07-2009, 11:26 AM
this film was rushed to the point that the animation was done in two weeks (done in less than 3 months), so there was no time for fine tuning etcetra, so I appreciate the honesty.
Not sure what you were trying to achieve in your film??? I would say you may need some psychological help :-)
Seriously though,if you work in the industry you have to work fast and to deadlines but if its for a student reel I would say just dont bite off more than you can chew. When it comes to the end of your time at university you want a reel thats gonna help you break into the industry.
Craig
Not sure what you were trying to achieve in your film??? I would say you may need some psychological help :-)
Seriously though,if you work in the industry you have to work fast and to deadlines but if its for a student reel I would say just dont bite off more than you can chew. When it comes to the end of your time at university you want a reel thats gonna help you break into the industry.
Craig
Satwinder
06-07-2009, 03:25 PM
Just because you only got 3 months does not mean it had to be a bad film, i worked on a film last year in 3 months and it turned out very we'll. Working under time constraints is a normal procedure in the industry its not excuse to produce bad work. Goodluck with next year hope it goes better for you.
Michael5188
06-08-2009, 05:17 PM
Could you explain for the sake of my curiosity what the story was meant to be?
WKTURNER
06-10-2009, 12:45 PM
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Beansproutinmyhead
06-11-2009, 02:19 PM
Out of interest did you pass to the next year at the institute where you made this?
also your youtube favorites... :surprised
also your youtube favorites... :surprised
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06-14-2009, 01:34 AM
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