foolontheplanet
05-24-2009, 04:35 PM
If everyone could give me as much critique on this as possible, I'd appreciate it. I'm especially having some issues with the timing I think. Thanks for any help you can give.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1sTwnURCcs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1sTwnURCcs
