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poiupoi
05-14-2009, 02:15 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g51/377851/377851_1242306913_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g51/377851/377851_1242306913_large.jpg)

Title: Calcium Project
Name: Alexandru Baston
Country: Romania
Software: Maya, mental ray, Photoshop

This was a 3 day project.
I ve tried my best to obtain a more clean and realistic render.

Software used: Maya, Mentalray, Illustrator and Photoshop.
Hope you guys like it, and i almost forgot: advanced critique pls, i really need it.
Thank you.

free3dart
05-14-2009, 06:46 PM
Good model, texture and lighting, the DOF effect is good, nothing bad with this image. good work mate.

InfernalDarkness
05-14-2009, 07:40 PM
I think it's an excellent render, my only issue is that one wouldn't know the topic of the scene at all unless one read the title. The only reference to calcium is in your title; they may be existing calcium supplements, but there's no indication in the scene that they are calcium supplements at all.

I think putting the same bottle upright, with the label at least partly legible, would go a long, long way in completing your scene. As it stands, they could be urinal cakes, seat cushions, or any other short cylindrical object. Does this make sense?

But a very clean render. I'd just like to see more definition of the product you're rendering.

CGLucas3D
05-15-2009, 01:11 AM
Nice, perfect render, i like the clean style of render and also the light is nice.

opera1982
05-15-2009, 02:38 AM
Good model,I love!!

EHouser
05-27-2009, 03:30 PM
very nice work!

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