View Full Version : Character: Aqua warrior
samtack 07-16-2003, 10:52 PM hi this is a character modelled by a friend that i am currently attempting to texture...im basically learning as i go on but im at a point where i really need some pointers and critisism...im using max and brazil for renders...
http://www.mikehabjan.com/adam/1.JPG
http://www.mikehabjan.com/adam/2.JPG
http://www.mikehabjan.com/adam/3.jpg
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Washek
07-16-2003, 11:15 PM
Little head man :) and some bugs in anatomy of character....big thighs and calfs.....It's only my suggestion :)
Kuro Hime
07-16-2003, 11:34 PM
I agree ,his head is to small for his large body.Maybe his neck is a little too short to.
The underwear doesn't really make him look like warrior :p but I guess,you still need to put him in a battle-uniform of some sort
His right arm (from my point of view) is bothering me.But I guess that'll just be me :shrug:
Maybe you could give his fingers just a little more of an attached look,like a frog (if you k now what I mean).I'll make him swim/move faster in one of those underwaterfights... ;)
Nice work
samtack
07-16-2003, 11:41 PM
hehe jsut crits on the textures guys...modelling is done and wont be changed since its done by a friend and hes happy with what hes got...armor will be added later on but for now its jsut basically a skin texture im looking for crits on...maybe some lighting tips also
Kuro Hime
07-16-2003, 11:44 PM
:blush: I'm sorry I didn 't read the part where you say you are only texturing this model...:blush:
NIce going,but Why did you make his middle area so dark?it's bothering me.The dark part always catches my eye first,then I inmediately get confronted with his onderpants...:shrug: ... maybe it's just me ...
supernaps
07-16-2003, 11:50 PM
:beer: sup brovah~!
hey~ this is Lord Aki by the way~ heheh~ well. lets see.. personally i think there should be a rangle of more colours~ more of a contrast in the body.. perhaps making the characters palm's a bit more pale'er.. then the rest.. maybe adding more saturation in area's like the face and limbs.. darken area's which would have more thicker skin such as the knee's and elbows... you know what i'm drivin at right?
another thing i think would be cool if you added was like a pastelly peach colour to the soft skin spots like his lips and eye lids.. and other senstive area's that'll look hype with the colour's you got now~ so yeah~~ WORD keep up the great work~!!!!!:applause:
samtack
07-17-2003, 01:54 AM
hey Aki whats up man!! thanks for the input...im gonna try and get rid of some of the black area since a couple people have commented on it
and ill see how it looks with some mroe contrasting colours
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