WIP: Imperial Axe-Man

[jaucifer]

you style of drawing is very good. I like the shading of the hair tone.

[SoulSurvivor]

10x, but if you have an offer what to change pls, write here.

[SoulSurvivor]

http://survivor.free-host.com/Imperial%20Axe-Man(Upd1).JPG

Here's the update.Tell me what colour to put for hair?

[SoulSurvivor]

Update

http://survivor.free-host.com/Imperial%20Axe-Man(Upd2).JPG

[jaucifer]

I think your head is too small for the body.

[SoulSurvivor]

i will try to make it bigger.

[awesome pants]

I agree with jaucifer, you should try and make the head a little larger to fit the body, also, i would give his quads some more definition, it just seems funny how his upper body is so huge, and his lower body is underdeveloped. I hope that helps some. :D

[SoulSurvivor]

It looks better now
http://survivor.free-host.com/Imperial%20Axe-Man(Upd3).JPG

[DrakeX]

yes not only does the head nee to be bigger but it needs to look a bit more mature and more angry.. now it looks kinda like a 13-year-old kid being mad on the body of a weightlifter..!

also i think it looks like he's wearing a diaper and i don't really like the hair. looks kinda feminine.

[SoulSurvivor]

Do u saw the latest upgrade?Now it looks better but i'll try to make it more angry.Don't worry i'll fix everything except the hair.
I think the hair is not the reason that he looks feminine.The face
is that part.

[DrakeX]

i looked at the upgrade and it does look a little better.

this isn't to say that i don't like the drawing tho! i do like it. it's cool but it could be better :)

[SoulSurvivor]

I know, i know.Sorry!I'm not that kind a man to say that i'm the gratest.I don't understand you.Sorry again!I'll try to look better but can't change the hair now.
:blush:

[Lex Talionis]

Hi, my first post on this forum, I must say I'm amazed at the quality of the artists here, looking through this forum has really inspired me to start drawing again.

Anyway.. Back to the topic.

The hair looks great so don't change that, I think the problem is the face looks a little feminine. I’ve taken the liberty of testing out a few changes on the face to give you a few ideas.

http://www.tcsuk-dean.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/images/axeman_face.jpg

I tried making the jaw wider, moved the mouth and nose up a little to make the front of the jaw deeper. Pushed up the shadow on the side of the face to make the cheekbone slightly higher and added a slight shadow between the eyes to give the impression of a brow ridge.

I agree with 'awesome pants' about the legs, they could look better if you add more definition. Google some images of bodybuilders and use them for a reference.

http://images.google.com/images?q=bodybuilder&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&hl=en

http://www.optimumfitness.com/images/leepriest1.jpg

Good luck...

[SoulSurvivor]

Here's the update.
http://survivor.free-host.com/Imperial%20Axe-Man(Upd4).JPG
I'll make the legs at the end.

[cgtalkmember]

not bad, but it needs muscle on the thighs and the head still too small, meaby tone down the arm muscles that will help, and let me say that thats a lot of hair :cool:

[jaucifer]

I like the way U shadow the blade of your axe.:thumbsup:

[SoulSurvivor]

Great update today

Please, tell me what to draw for background?

http://survivor.free-host.com/Imperial%20Axe-Man(Upd5).JPG

[KazuyaMochu]

I'm sorry, but the pose kill it... it just doesn't look like a warrior's pose.

but if you're just going for the coloring process, then I would say your in the good way

just keep going. and remeber, that everything counts for a good drawing


Kazuya Mochu

[SoulSurvivor]

10x but i need to know what to draw for background?

[jaucifer]

as for the background, I guess it should be a battlefield, because of the blood dripping from the axe.

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