Critics plz

[Goatfuzz]

It would make a cool background. Nice! :thumbsup:

-Also, if you just re-name the file: geocities.com/vipercgtalk/splash.jpg.txt then you can display it right in your post. :D

[Viper-Designer]

thnx for the tip I'll try it when I'm not lazy :p

[Ian Jones]

Hey, there's some interesting shapes in there... but imo it lacks some focus. At the moment the distribution of detail, scale changes, shape changes etc...is all fairly even and arbitrary across the composition. From an observers point of view, I'm looking for something to get out of this picture. Perhaps a repetition of a particular shape, a defined focus point, a rhythmm etc. I like it, but I don't see anything i particular that really tweaks my interest to explore it some more. In the chaos you need to try and bring some sort of structure out, some element of focus. Something for a viewer to get their teeth into (so to speak). You sort of have more focus in the upper right of the pic, but imo not enough.

"It would make a cool background. Nice!"... That kind of highlights what I mean. Everything sits in waiting, like a background, but nothing specific really jumps out or has a life of its own. It depends, once again what your intentions were so yeah... that's all I can comment on.

I hope that helps.

[Viper-Designer]

Hey Ian Jones
You're right. But this is just the background. Maybe I'll change it with photoshop but the thing is I'm going to give it a few effects with Flash. Stuff like falling starts etc. or masking effects :arteest:

[Chris88]

Nice abstract peice. I like how it blends out. Only thing I dont like is the top bar with the text. Maybe some pixel art and some pixel fonts in the picture would spruce it up. Nice materials also. Good job.

[Ian Jones]

heh... its fine then. I didn't realize it was meant to be a background. :blush:

[Viper-Designer]

lol hey no prob thnx for the tips anyway :thumbsup:

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