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no2_pentarou
07-14-2003, 08:55 PM
My latest piece of work, 100% Photoshop, about 3 days.

http://www.digital-phoenix.net/wip7/dessin7.jpg

Grinning Maniac
07-15-2003, 12:09 AM
The body looks good, but you need to improve on the face. It looks a little flat. The comes and lips come out and you but the other parts of the face seem pulled back.

Rei Ayanami
07-15-2003, 12:12 AM
LHS of the face (as we look) needs more polys! (jk) it needs to be smoother, esp for a flat face like that. and i see people with faces like that, its good i think.

no2_pentarou
07-26-2003, 12:53 AM
Update - see 1st post

singleguy
07-26-2003, 04:25 AM
the nose is a bit flat.. but overall seems good ..

starqueen
07-26-2003, 04:47 AM
I think the hair is taking away from the shape of her... If it was fluffier at the top, had more volume, it'd really bring out the shape of her head and make everything proportioned I think.

I absolutely love how you did the background, have you considered her lips to be as vibrant a red? :D

no2_pentarou
07-26-2003, 05:14 AM
Yeah I tried different tints of red (both dark and vibrant) for her lips but it didnt look very good, distracting...

As for her hair, I dont know, I wanted them to be flat and pointy so it's not easy to add some volume without a different haircut, maybe with some highlights/shadows/textures

wahahaha
07-26-2003, 08:15 AM
the mood is nice.....but somehow it seems that the hair doesn't belongs to her!! :)

Segmoria
12-13-2003, 10:54 PM
isn't she a bit too muscular? I mean her bust is way too bulky in reference with the head.
And maybe you should look into the lower part of the eye...looks too flat..maybe add some sort of thicker eyeliner?

so is this 3d or 2d? is it possible that you may have posted in the wrong category?

Carrot Juice
12-13-2003, 11:20 PM
I think what looks off about the hair is that it is not "tall" enough- the eyes should be about halfway up the head, and these are about 1/3 from the top!

Really nice composition, though. I love how you did the lips and flowers.

boboroshi
12-13-2003, 11:42 PM
I think the lips look great. Something about the eyes doesn't feel right.

ghosty
12-14-2003, 01:17 AM
take away a little cheek and give the chin a little more "shape"~~~ nice work

Zycho
12-19-2003, 03:08 PM
Good work, and great colors!!

I'd like to see more depth between the eyes. You can't really see where the back of the nose ends, and the eye-socket (if that's what it's called) begins...

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