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jeroentje
05-07-2002, 09:56 PM
Okay, I found the gutts to join the challenge.
I read the April-challenge stops on May 15 so I still have a couple of days. Hope I'll find the time.

Just finished this sketch of the little mermaid.
I'm going for a goldfish-look :)
The fins look a bit too thik now but that's just because of the sketchwork. Want to keep 'm very light, like transperent.

Want to keep the coloring a little sketchy/smooth mix, well... let's just see what time will bring.

Hope you like her. Please critt before I ink her.

Bye, Jeroentje :wavey:

- - -
btw, as Crumb said; "A dirty mind is a joy forever".

puddlefish
05-07-2002, 11:19 PM
Looks nice, and good to see more people joining the challenge!!
The only thing I'd say is that her face doesn't look very feminine. Other than that it's looking good!

Joril
05-07-2002, 11:39 PM
O jee,
Ik vrees dat onze kritiek ongenadig verpletterd zal worden eens we het uiteindelijke resultaat te zien krijgen.
Als ik je vorige posts bekijk :eek:

Het ziet er al redelijk goed uit hoor, misschien kon haar lichaam ietsje langer zijn, maar dan nog, een goudvis heeft niet echt een langwerpig lijf :hmm:
En de manier waarop haar haar in het water waaierd, heel mooi :thumbsup:

Veel plezier er nog mee!

System404
05-08-2002, 12:19 AM
hey great sketch! that would look greeat painted, good composition, but i must agree with puddlefish the face looks a little manly due to the very large cheek bones and jaw line....it reminds me of the comic book artist Frank Quitely on how he draws women. Can't wait to see it painted though!!!

jeroentje
05-08-2002, 07:24 AM
I've just taken a look at the goldfishes in the watertank here at the frontdesk. Theres definately gonna be some changes in the fins&tail tonight. About the face: yes you're right, she does look a bit to manly now, but I use these lines just for figuring out the main-shapes. I do the lines for placing of the shadows, and erase 'm afterwards, so everything gets a lot softer.

Have to start working now :annoyed: , it's 9.30 in the morning here.
Jeroentje
:wavey:

jeroentje
05-08-2002, 09:43 PM
Hmm, 44 views in 23 hours.

Whatever.
I'm having a good time and that's the most important.

Here's the (semi-)final inking. :wip:
I will start coloring now and just change some details in the lining while doing that.

I really hate my first posting when I see it back.
Women should be gracefull. That's why I got rid of the side fins.
I did add gills aswell as you can see.

Hope you enjoy this as much as i do. :bounce:
Cheers, Jeroentje :beer:

jeroentje
05-08-2002, 10:27 PM
btw here's a close-up.
As I said, all the lines in her face are just for shape.
They'll be gone in the end.

I will start painting tomorrow (...or get a life :insane: . One or the other).

Going to bed now. (0:32)

puddlefish
05-08-2002, 10:30 PM
Looks good so far, but I'd make her jawline more angular, and the chin a little smaller.

jeroentje
05-08-2002, 10:35 PM
Originally posted by puddlefish
Looks good so far, but I'd make her jawline more angular, and the chin a little smaller.

Thanks man.
Specially from you. Your entry really kicks ass! :buttrock:
Sorry, about "more angular", my english is failing on me.
I would love to hear what you mean.

Bye, jeroentje

jeroentje
05-09-2002, 08:21 AM
Puddlefish,
Do you mean that you want a bigger jaw?

btw I think she looks like a "healthy farmers-daughter" now. :)

Will start coloring this afternoon.
Jeroentje

Joril
05-09-2002, 10:41 AM
jawline more angular, and the chin a little smaller.

Hij wil dat haar kaakuitlijning wat hoekiger is, en een kleinere kin.
Sorry again for the Dutch.

I wouldn't make the jaw bigger, she'd start looking to manly.
It even might be a good idea do make the entire jaw a little smaller and a little less round.

jeroentje
05-09-2002, 11:45 AM
Okay, here's a wip for you.

About her jaw&chin; I think she's lovely and I'll keep her this way. (I like a firm woman :) ) Think it gives her some personality. Too standard women are boring. It's the little mistakes nature makes that make them really sexy.

I'm just finding the main shadows now, finding the lightning.
Color's not good yet, way to brown, she's a redhead so she will be a lot paler. But I will put an adjustmentlayer on top of my bodycolorlayer later. It's just shaping now.

Have to do some other things now, will be back to this in a few hours.

jeroentje :wavey:

jeroentje
05-09-2002, 11:47 AM
:D sorry, forgot the picture.
J.

jeroentje
05-09-2002, 04:05 PM
And here's another wip for you.
I could use some support please :sad:
jeroentje

jeroentje
05-09-2002, 04:07 PM
Man! I keep forgetting to attach the pictures.

errorinprogress
05-10-2002, 02:11 AM
her nipples are a big too big and stratched out, otherwise, great!

jeroentje
05-10-2002, 09:26 AM
Thanx for the compliment. :bounce:

Quote from "the Full Monty";
"Do you really think her breast are too big? Is that possible? I didn't know that was possible..."

Anyway, you might have a point though.
(or is it "tho", trying to improve my English)

jeroentje

jeroentje
05-10-2002, 01:25 PM
Oh HELL!
Just made a horizontally flip of the image. I now see what's wrong with the face!!!!

Puddlefish.. I stand corrected. :blush:

I will start working on it tonight again if I can find the time (it's 15:27 here... 1h33m to go).

jeroentje

jeroentje
05-10-2002, 08:11 PM
Okay, I'm running out of patience with this lady now. I'm finishing the last details.

Cheers, :beer:

Here's the new face, think she could use some more hair:

Cgkoko
05-10-2002, 09:09 PM
:applause: This is great.Like it....Just one crit:make the chin smaller.She is great,give her an enviroment!

jeroentje
05-11-2002, 05:21 AM
Thank you!
I see some more things that should be changed in her face.

Jeroentje

btw, I'm working on an animation of her making passionate love now.

jeroentje
05-11-2002, 09:17 AM
Here's the animation.

Too bad for you that mermaids only make love with the lights out.
HAHAHA :twisted:

Nearly finished now.
jeroentje

btw whatever sick drawing you have in mind now; please keep it to yourself. Let's keep it descent here ;)

jeroentje
05-11-2002, 10:56 AM
Okay, I think she deserved something nice after that bad joke.
So I gave her some earrings. Jade is her color.
(edit - typo)

jeroentje
05-11-2002, 10:57 AM
And here's a detail of the fishie-part.

jeroentje
05-11-2002, 10:59 AM
Zooming out now...

jeroentje
05-11-2002, 11:16 AM
And here's the complete drawing.

Can't go any bigger since I work in Photoshop 4.0 without the save for web function. (And without the history-palet. That one I missed even more. Just installed 5.0 so that last thing won't be a problem 4 the future.)

I put in a quote from Harry Potter 4 about mermaids... Maybe I shouldn't be mixing up naked women with childrensbooks but he... it's MY party here :)

Hope you all like it.

Bye jeroentje :wavey:

(ps, if you decide to rate her; please be gentle with her ;) )

puddlefish
05-11-2002, 11:29 AM
Looks great! well done :thumbsup:
eeeeeewww... photoshop 4.....:shame:

jeroentje
05-12-2002, 07:39 AM
Thank you Master puddlefish :wavey:

Joril
05-12-2002, 10:23 AM
She's looking really really good.
And it's to my eyes totally original, i've never seen a mermaid draw like this (the tail). Exelent attention to details as well (hands, tail). And her face looks very "real".
Come to think of it, it didn't really took you all that long to complete this work.


I can't believe no-one has given you a fair rating for your work.
You deserve at least the amount of stars I'm giving you.

jeroentje
05-12-2002, 10:46 AM
:love: :blush:
Thanks you so much, my Belgium friend!
Really appreciate this!
jeroentje

btw, I'm practicing faces. I want to get better at that. I will start a new thread now.

Cgkoko
05-12-2002, 01:52 PM
:) Hey...I see it finished...Well done.Great job!:thumbsup:

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