Tomahawk Bike

[Rchitekt]

I would really like any criticism about my vehicle, if anyone cares to make a post. Thanks!

[Rei Ayanami]

Ok, first the bar going back from beneath the handle needs more divisions virticaly.
fron of the body, at the bottom looks like a spline (you use splines) mess, as there is a lip in the middle, and none further up.
finally the tyre texture could do with work.

(hardly 3 wheels!)

[TheWraith]

how are you supposed to ride that? theres no place for the feet. thats the main thing that bugs me. it looks like the rider is in a steep forward lean position which would place his feet at the back tire and his calves and ankles would get crushed from the rocket engines

[Rchitekt]

Thanks for all the crits.
Ayanami- I see what you mean about the front of the bike. The bike frame was originally patch modeled and converted to Editable Poly. I'll see if I can straighten it out.
TheWraith- The project was originally a school project where we had to combine 2 industrial objects to make a new hybrid. I choose a bike and a jet. But, needless to say, the design isn't flawless. I was thinking about rendering it with an environment and without the jet engines... Just a bike on a street or something. I'll try to post something when I get a chance.

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