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yinako 04-24-2009, 08:12 AM http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g40/440/440_1240559933_medium.jpg
female dancer concept I did about a year a go, this is a sort of a scifi modern fashion dancer ... with my limited drawing skills, pieced together in photoshop. would like some comments to take this image a bit more polished and add a background.
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matsman
04-24-2009, 09:50 AM
Very beautiful... nice concept.
2 things... first her right shoulder is kinda weird.. it seems to be sticking out quite unnatural and her hand looks really weird too with that finger thumb... thing
second (actually third) love the concept but I think dancing with those weights on ribbons is quite dangerous... especially for the onlookers... but also her... thats gonna hurt when you stop pirouetting.
Other than that quite nice!
PS just noticed... the ring in the middle of her chest... dress.. doesn't look 3d but more pasted on the skin... in real life that's probably going to be floating a bit over the chest and you'd see the outline of the shape through the ribbons... but thats details :)
Cristofer
04-27-2009, 01:43 AM
I really like the concept and pose. Only thing I would suggest is maybe go a little lighter on the contrast. The face is really good, but her dress seems a little high in the contrast department. (dodge tool?) That might change when you add a background however. Hope that helps.
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