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volumelight
04-23-2009, 06:23 AM
this is my first serious attemp to matte paint

source file
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv38/volumelight/DSC00676-750580copy.jpg

my matte paint(the pillar and the gate are done in 3dsmax)
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv38/volumelight/volumelightmatte-1.jpg

will be posting the "making" soon.comments are welcome
thnx

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degerardo
04-28-2009, 12:42 AM
Here is something. Your work have good idea. Try separate with some atmosphere (haze, dust, air) foreground, midground and background. Also the colour palette(blue) in the grayscale line, are very burned. Too contrasty-(black). Also the texture on the statue (front left hand) is too oversized.Destrucion is okay, but try to separate objects also there with some fog, haze etc.(balcony to wall just a litle bit etc.)

volumelight
04-30-2009, 07:09 AM
thnx for the suggesstions....i will try to put up these things in the next versions.

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