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Well i want to finnish this in here.
I didn't have enough time, or i did but, i didn't want to sit inside in my vacation so now when i'm at work and forced to be in i can work on this.
Here is link to original thread: http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=67653
And where i'm now:
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Ooook then.
I can't use ftp rigth now so here is couple attachements of my progress:
And another
Any toughts at all?
Ok here is images if u people don't like attachements
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body10.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body11.jpg
Now hands......... oh i hate hands! Do i have to?
Here is new render with hands
ofir3dvb
07-16-2003, 09:02 PM
the model look great!! i really like it.
but the face look too masculine(i hope that like that said that.....if not so i mean to "of male"))
Hey thanks:love:
I agree face being too masculine. Any ideas how to make it more feminine?
Here is same image as last attachement, but this is in my space:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body12.jpg
What do you think about proportions?
Here is small update, tweaked head little, smaller fingertips and little longer legs.
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body13.jpg
Kuro Hime
07-17-2003, 11:10 PM
Looks a lot better now :).
Good job on making the nose more womanlike,still needs a tiny adjustment I think,but I can't put my finger on it ...:surprised
Maybe the head is a bit to big,and to triangle-shaped...maybe give it a more round/oval shape.:)
Thanks, glad u like it better
Here is start of gun, need lot details tought.
Do u like my lame desing?
Edit: I uploaded same image so u can view it from my webspace
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/gun.jpg
If anybody is imtrested here is closeup of head.
Please ingore that ear
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Head.jpg
Kralle
07-22-2003, 06:13 AM
well, i think it looks pretty much awesome,
nice miniskirt, i think once the guns are done tehy'll llook awesome too. All you really need to do is make the head better. Like ya make it look more inecent, right now she looks so savage.
Thanks Kralle, but i think there is room for improvements in that head, i just have to figure out how and what i'm going to do with it.
In meanwhile here is gun try number 2:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/gun2.jpg
And here is one stupid render i made:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body14.jpg
I made another scope and i think it fits better.
Do you?
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/gun3.jpg
Thanks folks!
She have new head and i like it(actually rather old head, but tweaked)
and now she have little attitude and character:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/NewHead.jpg
I'm not really sure what to do next, i like allmost everything(that wont last long) so there is no point to move existing around so maybe
little details, any ideas what?
texturing, oh this is going to be painfull, plan is to learn UV, but maybe i should start it with more simple modell?
or rigging, yep easy as catch fart and paint it red. How in earth i'm going to make those belts to deform right?
Anyway here is current state of her:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body15.jpg
meheekano
07-25-2003, 05:19 AM
i think you need to bring upper back some
put an arch in it
Thanks i'll see what i can do.
I started textures, just prodesurals for now to see wich way to go
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Tex.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Body16.jpg
Wich one is best? I like black :D
Yep it's me again:p
I rigged her, but not wery happy about it and i could not make working rig for belts. Any advise?
I'll go and learn little more and build new armature for her.
Anyway here is little testpose:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Pose.jpg
yep easy as catch fart and paint it red. How in earth i'm going to make those belts to deform right?
mind if I use this phrase in my posts?:p
Go ahead, it's from old joke wich shows that finnish are most clever people of them all:rolleyes:
Swedish(these jokes alvays have one swede), american(this is unrelevant, only finnis and swedish are important) and finnish get cought by giant. Giant was bored and did not eat them rigtaway, instead of that he said "If u can think task for me that i cant do i let u go". So american said" Drink all water from all lakes of the world" Giant did and ate american. Then swedish said"eat all trees from world" Giant did and ate swedish. Only finnish was left and after little thinking ha said"fart, catch it and paint it red" Giant could not do it an let finnish go.
Yes that shows that we finnish are most clever people of tha world.
Anyway any c&c of my chick?
oh I see :applause:
But I can fart and light it on fire:eek:
Originally posted by mora
But I can fart and light it on fire:eek:
Trust me, that can be painfull:blush:
Pufferfish
08-07-2003, 12:42 PM
moi!
Cool chick! I like her attitude! Nice pose.
Have you heard about the finnish who escaped from the devil?
It is the same joke but the giant was devil.. and finnish guy made lots of holes to a tincan and then farted in it and asked if the devil knows which hole it came out from :scream:
hehe well anyhow.. your chick is nice:thumbsup:
basse
08-07-2003, 02:04 PM
you jpegs are quite distorted you know!
so.. the bellybutton looks a bit strange..
boots look like piece of wood.. try to put some shape into those.. otherwise. I like the cloth.. and .. colors are quite nice too..
where are the tampaxes?
.b
Pufferfish
08-07-2003, 04:43 PM
aww... basse I checked your work (coffeestories)
Excellent drawings.. you really used coffee and ink on paper?..or do you just drink coffee too much *grins*
The mood in your work is very good...kinda sad but not.. dunno how to say it :)
...but it is sad that I did not know of you earlier.. I needed one CD cover.. "out of this gloomy light".. I think your style is just what we looked for.
keep it up..
Another pose:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Pose2.jpg
hehe really nice model! she look like a real B**CH :D :drool:
ComatoseWolf
08-15-2003, 09:38 AM
Nice work, it's come a long way. but, i think you should do something different with the hair, mainly the bangs up front. maybe if you curled them into the forehead area instead of leaving them falling straight down. Just an idea
REZI-st
08-15-2003, 10:42 AM
very nice work :beer: The girl is rough. Have you plan any animation? Possibly in style RAMBO :thumbsup: (sorry my english is bad) :rolleyes:
Thanks for replys folks!:love:
Well after seeing awesome comsepts of Feng Zhu i kind of ditched orginal idea and based her new appearence loosily to this: http://64.246.38.49/artbyfeng/forum/feng_2_char.jpg (Scroll bottom of page)
And now my chick looks like this:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Feng5.jpg
Arms needs more details, legs are too long, i must do yet another head and so on.
Any c&c is appriciated
Rain 2.0
08-15-2003, 07:37 PM
I personally think that the feet are to small. It looks like they are not correct in size proportion.
Also wrinkles in the face are making her look to masculine and overly mature.
As far as the rest goes... looks f*** great.:buttrock:
Thanks, i agree about head and i make her anotherone hopefully better:wip:
Here is few diffrent angles:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Feng4.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Feng5.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Feng6.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Feng7.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Feng8.jpg
Looooooong time no update, but finally your wait is over!
New head is coming, well i have to make new ears for her, but other that that.....
.... what do you think?
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/head2_3.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/head2_1.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/head2_2.jpg
Here is update.
Ears are such pain in butt, but i'm pretty happy with these.
Minor tweaks here and there.
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Head1_1.jpg
Any better?
Another update:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Head11.jpg
I'm so sick of this head.
Well attached it to body: http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/chick.jpg
And i notice that body need much work too, so off to work i say.
Well finally i started mapping her.
First maps i made at work with incredible tools i have in machine there,
MS-paint and MS-photoedit :o :D . Well everybody know paint and photoedit is peace of crap too, but anyway i made this with those:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/UvStart.jpg
No crit need for this, it's only for killing time at work
At home i'm working little more serious maps with photoshop, basic colours, little bumb and spec all is wip tough, but here are pics:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Head_uv.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Head_uv2.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Head_uv3.jpg
All crit (hars or not) is welcome
I'm sorry to bother u wth these updatess all the time, but can't stop working on this.
Anyway here is something new:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/PlastBaby.jpg
And couple pics with blades and weird hair:
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Fenksu.jpg
http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/Game/Fenksu2.jpg
Little better i hope
http://img66.exs.cx/img66/9627/Fenksu3.jpg
Well i made little progress today hope u like
http://img53.exs.cx/img53/2715/Fenksu5.jpg
Hi again
Here is new small update.
Less spec(hair and clothes) and little dirtyer.
Face rigged(mouth interior missing still)
Hands little better and added fingernails.
Fixed stretching prob from that bra thingy.
Tryed to fix those stripes from bra thingy to leggins.
Are black parts too black?
Next inside of mouth or pantyes.....
http://img50.exs.cx/img50/6114/Fenksu8.jpg
And here is gray render for u
http://img46.exs.cx/img46/6076/FenksuGray.th.jpg (http://img46.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img46&image=FenksuGray.jpg)
shunsquall
07-30-2004, 06:09 PM
Hi Poju. As I saw, you've been working a lot on her since 2003 .I dowloaded her a long time ago on Elysiun, when she looked like Lara Croft ( I'm a Blender-guy like you...)! It teached me many things ( procedural eyes, rigging, posing...). But, why did you stop working on:shrug: ????
You should review her UVmaps ( there is a frightening artifact on her eyebrows:eek: )
Good luck!
Hi Poju. As I saw, you've been working a lot on her since 2003 .I dowloaded her a long time ago on Elysiun, when she looked like Lara Croft ( I'm a Blender-guy like you...)! It teached me many things ( procedural eyes, rigging, posing...). But, why did you stop working on:shrug: ????
You should review her UVmaps ( there is a frightening artifact on her eyebrows:eek: )
Good luck!
Hey, glad i could help u get started.
I just got bored this back then, or ran out of time or something. Anyway i want to finally finnish this(if i ever finnish anything)
Eyebrows are modelled and artifact is just rig prob, fixed it, thanks.
Ok one more for tonight.
Cigar really don't belog there, but it kind of came with teeths ;)
What is best way to rig tonque so it is easy to deform wildly?
Here is pic:
http://img45.exs.cx/img45/4130/Fenksu9.jpg
Wetterschneider
08-05-2004, 04:00 PM
She looks familier, but where have I seen her before?
polygun
08-05-2004, 04:53 PM
She looks familier, but where have I seen her before?
http://www.3dluvr.com/ic-art/html/pages/br_rayne.html
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