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surr

04-19-2009, 10:07 PM

Here is the first sketch:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e118/luvydove/vulture.jpg

WIP 1:

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e118/luvydove/vulturewip.png

WIP 2:

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e118/luvydove/vulturewip2.png

WIP 3:

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e118/luvydove/vulturewipc-1.png

I'm not sure if it is because I've been staring at it for a long time or what, but the image is starting to look boring. Also, the hair and shirt looks a little weird. Any help would be greatly appreciated! :)

DArcy1

04-23-2009, 01:47 AM

UP until the last image it was looking pretty cool, actually. Then it fell down. One issue is you've lost that tiny-pupil manic look to her eye - she looked crazy, and that she needed to be because she was about to transform herself into god-knows-what with that mask. Now her skin has lost the blood-red tones, she has nice neat hair, and a summer frock...argh!

Go back to the second last one (but re-do the eye). Leave her hair straggly, and leave her nude (you could do a few tatoos).

Hope that helps.

D'Arcy

VenustusVis

04-23-2009, 03:04 PM

I don't know if it's your intent to stylize it, but the face is defiantly skewed and off in perspective

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