Still Life: Rotring pencil

[Frank Dodd]

Its a very simple subject but well executed. Personally I think it would be improved by improving the presentation perhaps a collection of the pencils in a transparent container with a blurred background and a nice dramatic camera angle and some nice lighting casting colour about the scene.

Nice modelling job it will be nice to see anything else you do with it.

[MMuster]

Good idea, thanks. I will think about it.

[Cinematography]

Suggestions:
1) Stronger shadows

2) More dramatic / specific lighting

3) Better camera angle
[maybe the camera could be a little higher, pointing down on the pen]

[animatabull]

nice work. sort out a nice composition though like said, the viewer feels way too close to the subject for comfort.

I personally don't like the table texture, looks fake, plasticy. Either make it really reflective varnished like, or bring it back more to a natural looking wood, bump map would help.

[MMuster]

Thank you all for your help. I now have got many aspects to work on. :thumbsup:

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