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jfanale3
07-12-2003, 11:24 PM
http://www.redrival.com/fanale3/jaimiesidewhair.jpg
Yo guys, this is my first post here, im psyched to finally talk to you all, youve put some crazy stuff up here, and its been fun to check out. Anyway, this is the head from a character i just started for my senior demo reel, please lemme know what u think,
thanks
jim

BeCOOL_MiN
07-12-2003, 11:30 PM
oh, man...I like it... Except mouth..-_-;



It looks good...I would like to see wire frame...
:rolleyes:


Also I think You better change your subject as Character : blah~blah, otherwise your article will be gone-_-;;;;

Right? guys?

jdevin
07-13-2003, 01:15 AM
Cool model. I like the stubble on the chin. The hair in general is great.
A couple quick comments:

How about making the stubble non uniform? It would be more interesting (in my mind anyway) if there was some variation there.

The eyelid looks wrong to me. The fold is looks too low and too dramatic. Maybe have it blend more into the brow.

The ear seems low to me but it may be the angle of the render.

Keep up the good work.

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