DWIV - 2D - Phill99 - Machine

[JacquesPena]

I wouldn't even add the word lame.:) I like the winning position, which I'm assuming he is on bodies? I think the composition idea is fine, maybe play around with some slight different angles? Are you conceptualizing more or going to the final?

[Phill99]

Thanks a lot Sleepinglion! you guessed it, those scribbles are supposed to be broken machines/bodies. I'm still playing around with it a lot. Thanks for the view and suggestions

[Phill99]

I've changed my character up a bit. The light gray are machine parts and cables, and the dark gray is flesh of some sort.

[Phill99]

thought it was time to start painting :) any comments and crits are appreciated. thanks!
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/105/a/4/a44e6afe8c234bf6c264b82e6f149f08.jpg

[Phill99]

latest wip...http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/114/9/c/DWiv_wip2_by_Phill99.jpg

[JacquesPena]

The armor is looking pretty impressive! I can see the paint skills. I noticed some red lights on the armor you had in the earlier version. You plan on adding something like that on the armor, for example the gears of war armor has lights and stuff.

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/eb/Gow-cogs.jpg (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/eb/Gow-cogs.jpg)

[Phill99]

Thanks very much! yes the red lights will be returning

[Ferx]

Hey Phillip,

Cool work!! like a lot the armor design for your cyborg, and thextures are looking really great. Maybe you can add some wires from the machine to the human head, only a wish :D Looking forward for more updates!! Cheers!! :beer:

[ario]

Good start! That's a perfect armor. but try some heavt arms/hands and legs/feet. I think the hands and legs are not strong enough. That's just a suggestion ;)
Cheers:
Alireza

[Phill99]

Ferx: Thanks! You read my mind about the head:) I was thinking of doing that for a while.
Thanks for the suggestions and view

ario: Thanks for the kind words. I completely agree with you, I'm having trouble with the legs especially. If you have any suggestions on how to fix them, I would love to hear them.

[Phill99]

update. Let me know what you think, any C&C are welcome
http://th05.deviantart.com/fs43/300W/f/2009/121/8/7/wip_by_Phill99.jpg

[ario]

Wow! The new concept looks much better. I see that you have been added 2 other hands. that's so good. A robot with 4 hands!
I just think about adding another 4 hands maybe + with their own shoulder! And each single hand can do a separate work ! That was just a suggestion, but maybe it can make the veiw of the robot more special!
Cheers:
Alireza

[Ataulfo]

very nice stuff.

keep it up
:beer:

[Phill99]

ario: Thanks a lot buddy:) I was thinking of making 2 of the hands holding weapons of some kind. Making each arm have its own shoulder sounds like a good idea, I'll try it. Thanks for the view and suggestions!

Ataulfo: Thanks a lot, glad you like it:beer:

[Phill99]

Update: hopefully i can finish:D Please let me know what you think. Any comments and critiques are welcome
http://th01.deviantart.com/fs42/300W/f/2009/125/5/7/DW_wip3_by_Phill99.jpg

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