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[PencilEater]

More images of my cyborg. The idea's still evolving,but I want to show you some of my works...my character is a mad scientist specialised in combat gases...maybe I will add to some Nazis' stuff as a recoll to nazis death camps and gas chambers...


Here's an "evolution" of my character:
http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/18/a166cd3da4a09c7fd93294465368ff_300x300.jpeg (http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/18/a166cd3da4a09c7fd93294465368ff.jpeg)

and here large version:
http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/18/7ce5442ba531736bb3ef6b0306cc96_300x300.jpeg (http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/18/7ce5442ba531736bb3ef6b0306cc96.jpeg)

[DarkBlueArt]

Hello

the concept is pretty cool, and your art skills display the character very good. Looks good so far, althought i liked the coat of the second thumb a bit more. It lets him look a bit more like someone who isn't interested in peoples pain, just in his own science....

I just hope you don't overdo it with the whole nazi-stuff. Maybe someone could feel insulted by this.

so long

[PencilEater]

Hello

the concept is pretty cool, and your art skills display the character very good. Looks good so far, althought i liked the coat of the second thumb a bit more. It lets him look a bit more like someone who isn't interested in peoples pain, just in his own science....

I just hope you don't overdo it with the whole nazi-stuff. Maybe someone could feel insulted by this.

so long

thanks, I don't like this version with bigger coat but i painted it a little bit more;] And I've left this Nazi's stuff...let the history rest in peace;] here's the new pieces:


http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/20/aec4d6b78d83693613f88be4238153_300x300.jpeg (http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/20/aec4d6b78d83693613f88be4238153.jpeg)

I need to work on his body. And I want to add to the final piece three assistants. Hunched, little bastards;]

[MR]

a very strong character you have here... but I prefere the head design of your earlier post...
good luck

[DarkBlueArt]

Hello

well, I never said don't do it. Do what you think is right. I just wanted to say that this could be a thin line. Using some parts of an old uniform would be cool i think, but putting swastika all over him would be too much.

With the new drawing, i have to confess, that i liked the last sketch a bit more. He had more details that fit together well.

The part with the assistents sounds good. Would fit very well i guess. Looking forward to see what you planed for them.

so long

[Barryxu]

looking nice~ But I like the big coat in the first post, give me a feeling of some kind of poison master. And I also like the skull feeling of the right one. Maybe you can combine them together~ :cool:

[PencilEater]

looking nice~ But I like the big coat in the first post, give me a feeling of some kind of poison master. And I also like the skull feeling of the right one. Maybe you can combine them together~ :cool:

Thanks:] I'm trying new things,but I'm not going to abandon this gas mask, it's linked with the character's history. And this big coat or skirt, or something;] I liked it too, but with it my character looks like a great formless mass:P


Hello

well, I never said don't do it. Do what you think is right. I just wanted to say that this could be a thin line. Using some parts of an old uniform would be cool i think, but putting swastika all over him would be too much. [QUOTE]

It was just a loose idea, maybe because of our latest classes in school. It'll be better to paint him just like mad scientist...

[QUOTE]With the new drawing, i have to confess, that i liked the last sketch a bit more. He had more details that fit together well.

The part with the assistents sounds good. Would fit very well i guess. Looking forward to see what you planed for them.

so long

I'd like to make this assistants like little cherubims, or just with cherubims' faces, to give them weird, maybe a little gothic or baroque look

a very strong character you have here... but I prefere the head design of your earlier post...
good luck

Thanks:] I thought this aureole could be a nice idea but now...I don't like so much, so propably I'll remove it in the final image.

[alexy]

You have a very cool character :]

I really like the second one in your "evolution" board. It could be a fantastic battle character with his coat. Like Vincent Valentine from Final Fantasy :p

[PencilEater]

Here's a new outfit for my character and one of assistants...

http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/25/c467e94dfff144b637c74f1a690d56_300x300.jpeg (http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/25/c467e94dfff144b637c74f1a690d56.jpeg)

And here a quick sketch for the final illustration or for the concept sheet:

http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/25/5f7d55ac06093c2e83bb8de7245f4e_300x300.jpeg (http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/25/5f7d55ac06093c2e83bb8de7245f4e.jpeg)

Any critique,advices even overpainting are welcome

[JacquesPena]

Neat idea for your characters assistant. Would be cool to have the assistant in the same pose and the book for the final.

Good job.

[DarkBlueArt]

Hello

it's developing very well, the assistent looks also very great. His pose reminds me of an ape (although he is human), what would fit with the mad scientist, who needs a lot of test animals. His function as a bookholder is cool, too.
The final pose looks a bit too "epic". I would like to see him walking between some corpse on the floor which are dying/ are dead by some gas he used, and he just looking down on them, while his assistents runs around him in ape-style.
Well, maybe i just push you too much in a direction you don't want to go. Understand my comment just as an offer.

so long

[DeadInTheAttic]

I like the final pose, but perhaps just turn him about 45 degrees towards us voyeurs, if you will stuck to such a pose.
And I like your character for being one possessing a lesser amount of muscles.
Perhaps exaggerate his proportions, his legs and arms an so one a bit longer, stretched. Might make him look somehow aristocratic-cunning, agile and noble, aware of his power.

Keep on ;)

[PencilEater]

Hello

it's developing very well, the assistent looks also very great. His pose reminds me of an ape (although he is human), what would fit with the mad scientist, who needs a lot of test animals. His function as a bookholder is cool, too.
The final pose looks a bit too "epic". I would like to see him walking between some corpse on the floor which are dying/ are dead by some gas he used, and he just looking down on them, while his assistents runs around him in ape-style.
Well, maybe i just push you too much in a direction you don't want to go. Understand my comment just as an offer.

so long

It's really funny,because my first idea for final illustration was the same as yours:P I have a sketch for such an image, I'll post it here when it'll be readable for others:P this image(this epic one) was a trial for getting new outlook for my character(I don't like the previous version)

Neat idea for your characters assistant. Would be cool to have the assistant in the same pose and the book for the final.

Good job.

He's in the final image sketch;]


I like the final pose, but perhaps just turn him about 45 degrees towards us voyeurs, if you will stuck to such a pose.

Thanks,but the final pose will be completely diffrent.

And I like your character for being one possessing a lesser amount of muscles.
Perhaps exaggerate his proportions, his legs and arms an so one a bit longer, stretched. Might make him look somehow aristocratic-cunning, agile and noble, aware of his power.

Keep on ;)

I like this type of characters, I'm trying to make him look like haughty, noble...I don't think it's a good word,maybe arrogant,presuming...something like that;]

[PencilEater]

Here's a sketch for m final illustration. For now it's just a sample of mood and colors, but you can see here a final look of my character(the lineart, I'll change the colors)


http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/26/7345ee69ca63c94d3f3c79ad0628b1_300x300.jpeg (http://wstaw.org/images/free/2009/04/26/7345ee69ca63c94d3f3c79ad0628b1.jpeg)

[DarkBlueArt]

Hello

comes out very nicely. I am really curious about your next steps. The colours aren't bad at all, but they gave the picture more the feeling of a burning fire. Maybe you want to try to step into greenish/blueish tones.

so long

[PencilEater]

Hello

comes out very nicely. I am really curious about your next steps. The colours aren't bad at all, but they gave the picture more the feeling of a burning fire. Maybe you want to try to step into greenish/blueish tones.

so long


I like this combination of green and red, I know I have to work on the tones,but this is just a beggining. And this red glow could be a fire from burning, dead bodies;] It matches greatly with this mood of plague and death, I think...Otherwise, green-blue background was just boring;]

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