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ario
04-08-2009, 05:57 AM
Hey guys.
I just start my DWIV threed with the concept of Dr. Siphon! in invoker class.
The idea comes from toilet!!! and the power of flushing! He can flush his enemies out by a powerful water flush or another magical flush. Or turn them to a piece of shit - sorry about this impolite concept! - and then flush it. or sending thousands of cockroaches. One of his weapon is toilet role of paper tissue ...
but I'm not sure about the face and the name!
Please help me to choose the correct name. Dr siphon or Dr flushsiphon or what ever you say...
And about the face, I just want to reach a unique face! and these faces don't satisfy me. I just numbered my favorite moods.
I would appreciate you to help me.
Thanks for your helps:
Alireza

ario
04-08-2009, 07:43 PM
Dr. Siphon!
Here is another sketch for concept!

http://www.gigaimage.com/images/7l65biitfi4164ncptl7.jpg (http://www.gigaimage.com/)
The Toilet ship that he can fly with it.
And I changed the vision of the flushes and his face, but I'm not sure about them yet.
Thank you:
Alireza

ario
04-14-2009, 09:03 AM
Hi. I think the face and the colors are calling me!!!
Maybe this is the final face for Dr Siphon or Dr Flush!
There is many ideas in my mind but the time is too short and I'm so busy these days.
I try my best to make my own Dr!
Best wishes:
Alireza
http://www.gigaimage.com/images/cb9f9fnf5cqmvfxikd8.jpg (http://www.gigaimage.com/)

ario
04-14-2009, 11:34 AM
Hi friends. I have renamed his name to Dr. Flush! and submited to the gameartisans challenge gallery. Dr. Siphon in my language is the same as Dr. Flush!
Best wishes:
Alireza
http://www.gigaimage.com/images/x1iusm78ch0ihhs58m.jpg (http://www.gigaimage.com/)

Ferx
04-14-2009, 07:48 PM
Hey Ario,

Really cool and funny concept!! Great!! I think is a very original idea. Like a lot your concepts for Dr. Flush :D . I think not only super muscled, strange, demoniac, realistic and a long etc. characters are suited for a game concept. Maybe I thinking more on animation concepts (a flaw of mine :D), where it is very important to give both personality and credibility to the character. I think that you can explore many concepts, that is the fun part of this challenge :D Good luck and waiting for more updates! :D Cheers!!

NH
04-15-2009, 12:51 PM
Heyyyy Ario what a cool idea you have there ! Great start !
Your Dr flush made me laugh he's so great and guess what I find him so dangerous too :D
My buddy ferx is on the same way and I also loooove his stuff ! I am not funny enough to design cool stuff like you guys :cry: I 'll give it a try next challenge.

Some comments now:

I personally like your sketch number 1 on your first post. I also love the head design on number 4 and I think you should try a mix between them. The hair cut and beard are great.

About the flushes I like the first ones you designed and I think you can keep the old style design and add some nuclear stuff on them, and why not, turn them transparent. I think it will fit more to your concept ... the new ones look like reactors or something like that.

About bugs, I think that you should try to have A beetle as a pet for your Doc, he would be always on his shoulder and maybe Dr flush could turn him to a giant mutant beetle with some nuclear drops to fight his enemies... I don't know just an idea :) but I am sure that it will work better with just one beetle.

Oh last suggestion :D : try plumber boots

Great start buddy your stuff is really inspiring, I think I didn't wrote a comment as long as this one since the beginning of this challenge :D hope it would help.
Keep it up I'll keep an eye on this thread with big pleasure ! hahahaha :arteest:

Cheers

ario
04-16-2009, 02:10 PM
So many thanks my friends. I really need your feedbacks and they were so useful.
I will do what you said dear NH and Frex. I'm working on concept yet. But soon will start for the final character.
Now I'm sure about the first skech - No. 1 -!!! and going to develop that concept. A tiny, funny and powerful Dr. Flush!

Thanks for your helps again. :D
Alireza

NH
04-16-2009, 02:25 PM
GO GO GO GO :thumbsup:

ario
04-23-2009, 08:08 PM
http://www.gigaimage.com/images/buydvbcxzojwfhnww60.jpg (http://www.gigaimage.com/)
Hey dear friends. This is a quick test for Hair colors, Glove, and Shoe.
I think he needs a shoe like No.1 - that made from black dragon leather with highest armor and protection! - because he is a doctor and those shoes are so shiny and valuable!
No.2 is a suede boot with more details and beautiful needlework. It has the same protection too!
No.3 is a black leather too but it has many little sparkle lamps on it and they turn on and off suddenly!

To NH:
As you suggested the boot for Dr Flush! I searched the web for boots. It was so inspiring. These are the boots I designed for him :P But the plumber boots are not good enough I think :D But if you think the plumber boots are good yet, I will try them :D Thanks for the feedbacks my friend.

Thanks for watching.
Please let me know what you think.
Alireza

Ferx
04-23-2009, 10:00 PM
Hey Alireza,

Really cool design :D Like a lot the Dr. Flush concept. Like you, I prefer the shoes (1), puts a more "doctor" note on the design :) The three pair of gloves look great, but maybe the rubber gloves of option (1) are best suited for the idea. Mayebe you can give a try to a some sort of fireman boots, a rubber boots, only a silly idea :) For the hair color I think (2) option can work well. Again , really cool work!! :D

Ataulfo
04-23-2009, 10:11 PM
Very funny character.:D
I preffer the second option of bots and gloves.
keep it up:beer:

ShamesArt
04-24-2009, 01:08 AM
the second looks more cool and funny, good luck brother ;)

mr-max
04-24-2009, 10:57 AM
woooow wow woooow
it's so funny
i like it & I preffer the first of shoes is better :applause:
regards :beer:

NH
04-25-2009, 05:24 PM
Heyy Ario how R you doin' :) I like your last sketch ! Very cool ! I attached a little file for you I hope it will hel you my friend.
I totally agree with Ferx about the doctor/scientist note. If you aren't convinced with rubber boots try some leather ones like on the attached file ;) But I still think that you should give it a try for rubber boots ;)

Oh tell me what do you thik about the magic tree :D

Keep up the good work Ario I am waiting for your updates buddy !

Cheers

ario
04-25-2009, 07:35 PM
Thank you so much for feedbacks and supports friends.

Frex: Thanks for the support, man. I try what you said my dear friend :) Cheers

Ataulfo: Thanks for the feedbacks my friend :D Cheers

ShamesArt: Thanks for the feedback my brother. Cheers

mr-max: Wow. nice to see you here my friend. Thank you for support :D cheers

NH: Thanks for the inspiring attachment! That was so cool! I like it so much. The head lamp and magic tree are the best ideas! :D
Thanks for the support dude. I try what you said my dear friend :D
Cheers:
Alireza

BaronImpossible
04-25-2009, 11:23 PM
Love those last concepts :D

Aesthetically I prefer the first one with the shoes but the cowboy boots made me laugh even more so I'm not sure (I find cowboy boots funny at the best of times). Great idea, I hope you go with this.

ario
04-26-2009, 06:00 AM
Hey Simon. Thanks for the feedbacks. Still I'm not sure about shoe/boot !!! :( I will update soon but the time runs fast! Thank you my friend.

Phill99
04-27-2009, 01:57 AM
Great character your cooking up there! Can't wait to see more

ario
04-27-2009, 01:24 PM
Hey Phill. Thanks my friend. I'm still workin on the concept. and send the concept sheet soon in my next post.
I can't wait to see him completed too! :D
Cheers:
Alireza

ario
04-28-2009, 05:01 AM
http://www.gigaimage.com/images/1xof4nw8u4gz8fyb1ew7.jpg (http://www.gigaimage.com/)

Hey friends.
Here is the concept sheet. not the final but the most important things are collected!
I really don't want to disappoint you and want to use your feedbacks about boots - because I love the boots too ! - So I put the boots for the upgrade style! I think it works better!
In these busy days I will develop the concept a little more and start the modelsheet.

Hey NH, I used a modern lamp on head! and I still working on the magic tree!!! maybe as a
necklace! Thanks for the suggestions my dear friend. :D
Hey frex, Thanks for the supports and feedbacks. I used the shoe for the base! :D

So many thanks for your supports dear friends.
Dr. Flush is really waiting for your nice feedbacks and comments ;)
Cheers:
Alireza

Ataulfo
04-28-2009, 02:29 PM
Hi Alireza,
Very fun concept sheet.:D :D :D
keep it up, dude. Cheers

DeadInTheAttic
04-28-2009, 04:19 PM
Nice weird dude. I won't tremble in fear, but I like your design. The way you put things much bigger than your character on his back. I like this idea.
The crazier this one looks, the better it becomes. Just think about glasses, a monocle, distorted hair, thick eyebrows, stains on his clothing and many more.

ario
04-28-2009, 07:35 PM
Hi Ataulfo. Thanks for the supports my friend. Cheers :D

Hi Christian. Thanks for the support and good suggestions. :D I will try them in my concept development.
But about tremble and fear! Somebody told me people need the creativity and fun. I feel the game art is the best field for them. Maybe I'm tired of Dr. muscle, danger woman or a big guy! it's just the way I think about it but I try my chance ;) :)
Cheers:
Alireza

Ferx
04-28-2009, 08:52 PM
Hey Alireza,

Cool concept sheet :D Like a lot the nuclear flush tanks! Cheers!

ario
04-29-2009, 05:15 AM
Hey Fernando. thanks for the supports my dear friend.
Cheers!

Sanveganza
04-29-2009, 07:20 AM
i love his cockroach magic lol and the demon were great it so funny ! i love him before upgrade ;) keep it up dude ur rock

ario
04-29-2009, 07:42 AM
Hey Amir. Thanks for support my dear friend.:bounce:
Cheers!

FrozZT
04-29-2009, 01:51 PM
Yay! Awesome character m8! :) Brings back memories of old point and click adventure games, good days! :p The boots are really nice but looks kind of out of place on your character im afraid.. I'm looking forward to your development! ;) Keep it up!

-Niklas

ario
04-29-2009, 06:30 PM
Hey Niklas! Thanks for the feedback and support. I agree wiyh you about boots. So the original character has those shoes and I just put the boots for upgrade in the conceptsheet. Do you think about deleting the boots?? Other guys suggested the rubber or plumber or ... boots and that was a perfect idea. But I prefer the shoe then the boots in the concept. I'm really waiting for your idea my friend :D
Cheers!

BaronImpossible
04-29-2009, 10:30 PM
:D Keep going, those are great

ShamesArt
04-29-2009, 10:59 PM
yeahhh really great progress, very lovely and funny, keep going brother !

ario
04-30-2009, 03:28 AM
Hey Simon. Thanks for support dude. :D

Salam Shames. I'm glad you like it brother.

Cheers!

EhsanD
04-30-2009, 07:34 PM
eehehehe :D It's cool !
I like it dude .
Keep it up !
Good luck

ario
04-30-2009, 08:37 PM
Thanks Ehsan. I'm glad you like it my friend. :D
Cheers!

Barryxu
05-01-2009, 05:53 AM
hey, bro, your concept is very interesting and totally different from others! keep doing!

ario
05-01-2009, 06:51 PM
Hey Barry. thanks for support.
Cheers!

ario
05-01-2009, 07:20 PM
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/5646/drflushconceptsheet01.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

Hey friends.
This is the concept sheet - 99% yet!
I think the concept sheet will be this one with maybe a little changes for details.
I just start the model sheet and the final illustration with the same pose in the concept sheet.
Thanks for watching and supports.
All comments are most welcome.
Alireza

Phill99
05-02-2009, 01:33 AM
Love the character, you've got some funny concepts here.

ario
05-02-2009, 02:33 PM
Hey Phillip. Thanks for the support. :D

Cheers!

ario
05-02-2009, 05:41 PM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/350/drflushfigurecoloredwip.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

Hi dear friends. I satrt the illustration. you can see my basic pallet on the top of the picture.
I'm just waiting for your comments.
So many thanks:
Alireza

ario
05-04-2009, 12:00 PM
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/350/drflushfigurecoloredwip.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

Hi frends.
This is second step of my Dr. Flush! illustration wip.
All comments are most welcome and appreciated.
Thank you:
Alireza

ROBOTTANK
05-04-2009, 12:18 PM
awesome character man, pretty funny..I like the version with the boots a little more though, it's more original, but either way, great job.

ario
05-04-2009, 04:58 PM
Hey Andy. Thanks for the support. I'm glad you like it.
Cheers:
Alireza

PC
05-06-2009, 01:30 PM
Superb progress in it, justice well done to the concept.. am really impressed by the way you are pulling it off..way to go..good luck :thumbsup:

Ferx
05-06-2009, 09:14 PM
Hey Alireza,

Cool updates, Dr. Flush is looking really great :D Like the idea of the cockroaches army, hahahha cool!! Waiting for more updates my friend! Cheers!!

ario
05-07-2009, 04:55 AM
Hey Prithvi. I'm glad you like it. Thanks my friend. Cheers!

Hey Fernando. Thanks for support my friend. Updates will be soon. Cheers!

ario
05-16-2009, 09:49 AM
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/8213/drflushwip03.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

Hi dear friends. In these bussy days I just can present the color study about the golden things that added to the original picture.
Please let me know what you think about it.
All comments are most welcome and appreciated.
Thank you:
Alireza

ROBOTTANK
05-16-2009, 10:02 AM
looks good, the golden fixtures look alright to me, but I would make the CG logos a bit smaller. The size and color of the logos are a little distracting. Funny concept man, good job overall..

mr-max
05-16-2009, 11:57 AM
:bounce:
Excellent characer design and colorwork. Very nice!
your damet hot
keep the good work
Regards

ario
05-18-2009, 02:46 PM
Hi Andy and Akbar. Thanks for the supports my friends. And about what Andy said I will do some corrections for them. Time is too short!!! My god!
Cheers:
Alireza

ario
05-18-2009, 02:58 PM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/7181/drflushfinalillustratio.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

Hi dear friends. This one will be the final illustration! Hope you like it. I didn't submit this one yet!!! Please let let me know what you think about it.
All comments are most welcome and appreciated.
Cheers:
Alireza

ROBOTTANK
05-18-2009, 03:46 PM
nice finish..I love the stains on the tanks.

ario
05-19-2009, 12:39 AM
Hey Andy. Thanks for the supports my friend.
Cheers:
Alireza

ario
05-19-2009, 05:06 AM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/7181/drflushfinalillustratio.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6308/modelsheet.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

Hey dear friends. This is my final illustration and model sheet - in my short time! -. But unfortunately I couldn't see the edit page after uploading my last submition!!! Please somebody tell me what should I do!??? The page had an error message! I just want to be sure that my work is submited!!! :(
Please somebody help me!!!
Thank you:
Alireza

ario
05-19-2009, 08:25 AM
I just checked my submitions in final page and they were there! Thanks god!:bowdown:
Wish the best for every one.
Cheers:
Alireza

FrozZT
05-19-2009, 09:34 AM
Hey ario! Very nice finish! Its a very cool character who does seem to fit into a game that i would play, definately! I dont see you contact details in the images, i think they were supposed to be included in every image, maybe just double check with someone over at GA if it works anyway, or if you can change it.. I wish you luck in the judging m8! Congrats on finishing! :)

-Niklas

ario
05-19-2009, 10:31 AM
hey Niklas! Thanks for the support and kind words my friend. Cheers!

What a pity!!! What should I do? You are right! I didn't add my mail to the sheets!!! Does it make problem??? :(

FrozZT
05-19-2009, 10:40 AM
Hey. I have no idea myself if it will play a role in the judging, it would be best to contact an admin on Gameartisans.org i think. Hope it works out for you..

-Niklas

ario
05-19-2009, 10:43 AM
Thanks a lot Niklas.
I will do it as soon as possible.
Best wishes:
Alireza

ario
05-19-2009, 11:07 AM
Hey Nilas! I just checked the rules and examples! There was nothing about these kind of texts that we added to our works later! This way is better and professional, but maybe it's not necessary :D
Because we are all registered in the gameartisans as a member, and they have our contacts if they need.
By the way I must appreciate your supports and helps my friend. Thank you so much Niklas. see you soon my friend.
Best wishes:
Alireza

DDS
05-19-2009, 01:16 PM
haha just made me LOL. Super fun character. I'd looove to model it on my free time! (only that I just should go get a life though ;))

PC
05-19-2009, 03:18 PM
Aah..turned out nice..all the best..

NH
05-19-2009, 06:34 PM
Great Job my dear friend !

Ferx
05-19-2009, 08:04 PM
Hey Alireza,

Congrats on your finish ! :D Really cool character concept, great work. All the best and good luck! :thumbsup: Cheers!!

ario
05-20-2009, 12:31 PM
Hey Albert! I'm glad you like it :D My pleasure! I really want to see the 3D model! :bounce: But about the model sheet - that designed in a very short moment before deadline :( - I suggest you to start the model from final golden pose! If you had any problem feel free to contact me: l o t f a l i k h a n i @ g m a i l . c o m

Hey Prithvi! Thanks for your comments and supports. best wishes for you my dear friend. See you soon in other threads.

Dear Nabil and Fernando:
Thanks for all of your kind words and comments. I couldn't finish this job without your supports. This Challenge was so much fun for me and helped me to find such nice friends like you two. Good luck my dear friends. See you soon.

Best wishes:
Alireza

Ataulfo
05-20-2009, 01:07 PM
Great final image. You have one of the funnyest charcter.

Cheers!!

ario
05-20-2009, 06:04 PM
Hey Iban! Thanks my friend. I'm proud of your words :D
Best wishes:
Alireza

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