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redorb333
04-07-2009, 08:53 PM
Hi, i made this animation, it would be nice to have some critic, i am trying to learn so i would appreciate it thanks, here is the link


http://vimeo.com/4031368

Respawned
04-07-2009, 10:10 PM
It is looking good. One thing I notice is the weight is moving too quickly in some parts, especially once he has it up at his shoulders. It's hard to explain without showing you but when the weights tilt left to right it happens too fast, as though it suddenly has no mass at all, I think if you could fix that and smooth out the rest it would look better.

Hope that made sense and keep up the good animating!

phoenix
04-08-2009, 07:25 AM
Its looking good. the ending has little more of a problem. when he falls down, there you can add more work. its too smooth, play with spacing.



regards

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