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SouthernLaw
07-11-2003, 03:21 PM
I finished this book cover a few days ago and thought I'd get some feedback. It's already been sent off to the printer so I won't be changing it, but any critiques would be appreciated.

Modeled and rendered with Hash Animation:Master v10.5 - and some minor tweaking in Photoshop.
http://www.middlekidstudios.com/projects/CoverComp03.jpg

Thanks!

J

rikrog
07-11-2003, 03:43 PM
i personally would have gone for only using one of the images of the jewels (probably the top set) rather than dropping them both in. leaving more white space on the cover.

also a few little font things

the kerning on the letters R and T of heart looks a bit too close.

i would tweaked one of the letter E's in jewels a little bit to give it a more hand written feeling

nice cover

rik

SouthernLaw
07-11-2003, 04:32 PM
The number of jewels on the cover was dictated by the client... 9 on top, 3 on bottom. Don't ask me why. I did the best I could with it.

I see what you mean about the fonts though. I'll keep a closer eye on them from now on.

Thanks for the feedback!

J

rikrog
07-11-2003, 05:15 PM
dam those pesky clients!

Signal2Noise
07-11-2003, 05:47 PM
Damn! I thought I was entering a naked Jewel (http://www.allmusic.com/cg/amg.dll?p=amg&uid=MISS70305151325&sql=B3kd8vwbva9ik) gallery thread:annoyed:

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