Jonny Walker - Short Film

[lipuster]

is anyone actually seing the film??please guys, its a short film, and a beautiful one at that.

[SandeepMaithani]

how does it feel if somebody writes u something u've written here

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5837908#post5837908

You are getting noticed for wrong reasons mate...wont help...good time to apologize

may better sense prevail

[ZofieChau]

You did a wonderful job with the rigging of Johnny Walker and adding some personality into the bouncy walk, however to take it to the next level, I think that you should add more to it.

What I mean by that is this: it looks very simple and lacks some visual interest. It seems like you did try to take it a step farther by adding the two runners, the flying birds in the distance, etc, but I think that there should be more. Now, that does not mean that you should go over board to take the attention off the main point of the film.

However if adding more stuff in the background is not your style or strong point, try tweaking some varying actions and life to the character. Some good examples could be him simply combing his fingers through his hair, pulling out a bottle of water, or enjoying the scenery.

But whatever you do, best of luck.

[ZofieChau]

You did a wonderful job with the rigging of Johnny Walker and adding some personality into the bouncy walk, however to take it to the next level, I think that you should add more to it.

What I mean by that is this: it looks very simple and lacks some visual interest. It seems like you did try to take it a step farther by adding the two runners, the flying birds in the distance, etc, but I think that there should be more. Now, that does not mean that you should go over board to take the attention off the main point of the film.

However if adding more stuff in the background is not your style or strong point, try tweaking some varying actions and life to the character. Some good examples could be him simply combing his fingers through his hair, pulling out a bottle of water, or enjoying the scenery.

But whatever you do, best of luck.

[lipuster]

thanks dude for ur time.i absolutley agree with what u say.Its just that i made this film when i was just learning to get a hang of animation and needed to prove to myself dt i cud do a short film.

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