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crisplet

04-01-2009, 05:22 AM

Hey all!

I've got a quick anim here I'm thinking of expanding upon, but before I go any further with it I'd like some uber critical feedback. I'm not sure what it is, but I'm not sold on it...

http://sites.google.com/site/chrisimation/pantaloons

(just open/DL attachment: rnr_07_b.avi (http://sites.google.com/site/chrisimation/pantaloons/rnr_07_b.avi?attredirects=0))

Thanks for your time
Chris

crisplet

04-02-2009, 03:51 AM

anyone...?

Mr Burns says there's a shiny new donkey in it for you:D

oddel

04-02-2009, 04:22 AM

Hey, crisplet!

Good job so far. I'm guessing you plan to do more with this animation, so I only have a few things to critique:

1.) During the down position of each hop, except for the last, your character appears to only move in the up and down axis (e.g., frames 20-22, 29-31, and 38-41), when in fact, the momentum should continue moving in the direction he is hopping in, and...

2.) It would be nice to see more of this project animated, which may encourage more feedback.

Again, good work, and keep on at it!

-Delano

crisplet

04-03-2009, 07:56 PM

Thanks for your reply oddel!

Good eye, I totally missed that.

oddel

04-03-2009, 11:23 PM

No problem. Sometimes we can be so focused on one area, that we miss other areas that need to be addressed :)

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