View Full Version : Character: A man's head
07-10-2003, 11:04 AM
Author : Han Yong
Soft : Maya
07-10-2003, 11:05 AM
07-10-2003, 11:07 AM
07-10-2003, 12:02 PM
:) The model is interesting, he has personality. I only see that the eyes are strange, they seem they belong not to the character. Good work.:applause:
I agree, there is all sorts going on with those eyes. If you got that fixed you'd have yerself a top notch model. :applause:
07-10-2003, 02:26 PM
07-11-2003, 01:18 AM
he looks alot like mike tyson :) or zombie tyson with those eyes
/me covers ears and runs
07-11-2003, 08:12 AM
Actually, I'd say keep those eyes. They're quite stunning and I think they're what makes your character unique. I like them a lot. My problem is more to do with the hair at the top of his head (could be the depth of field) - but I think the hairline could afford to creep forward by an inch or two. If he's meant to be balding, then you really should rework the hairline. No one balds in a straight line. Use some reference pics.
:beer: :buttrock: :applause:
07-11-2003, 08:38 AM
i think the model looks cool.
the only crit i have is that the hair looks a bit naff.
sorry , but i think it's really letting the model down. but i just can't put my finger on why it is.
other than that it looks good.
07-11-2003, 10:09 AM
Great head, great personality as well. I agree with the eyes adding to that, but at the same time have the feeling they may just be a touch to floaty.
The skin has a lovely fleshy feel, but the forehead looks like texturing is stretched. I'm not sure that's the case, or that the streaks are in the texture itself.
It's my guess that you used fur for the eyelashes, eyebrows and hair and even though you seem to have done a good job (personally I feel fur is very difficult to manipulate indeed) I also have the feel the hair seems to be of an other order as the rest of the head. A slight bit of painted transperancy might help there. Thay may also resolve the horizontal hairline issue.
I'm also not sure about the level of bump on the face, the nose has a bit of an alcoholic feel to it due to the bump on the sides.
One area I think looks brilliant is as said before the skincolor, but in particular the mouth. It has this sort of perfect bumplevel painted on which works well with the purple-ish shade, giving it a real 'alive' feel.
07-11-2003, 10:40 AM
Thank you for your reversion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will do my best to improve myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
welcome to www.cgeden.com
07-11-2003, 02:26 PM
Very good and cool head model (but ugly) :applause:
great skin tones, those eyes are not so realistic
07-11-2003, 02:49 PM
near the nose, the bump maps are too big, i never seen bumps near a nose on anyone. Also the lines near the eyes, need more emphasis, they look like they are painted on and do not have depth. also the ring around the eye needs more definition.
07-11-2003, 02:54 PM
incredible how it looks, you can improve it a bit thou as some others have mentioned already, can't really add something to that..
but keep it up the good work ;)
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07-13-2003, 05:25 AM
GOOD work,u can work a little on the eyes and hair and can make it look even better...he does have a personality.
01-15-2006, 02:00 PM
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