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Multiductus
03-28-2009, 02:25 PM
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Title: Airships
Name: Sara Gioria
Country: Italy
Software: Painter, Photoshop

Created in Painter, light effects and minor tweaks in Photoshop.

I wanted to depict a young airship commander, I started with a wider composition, but after a few sketches I decided to narrow the scene and to put the girl onboard one of the ships.
I tried to give the piece an "old world" mood...

All comments & critics are welcome!
koansah
03-28-2009, 04:20 PM
secondo me, hai fatto un bel lavoro!!!

I think however, you could have added a bit of texture to the planes, as they seem too clean and neat in my opinion.

Looks good still. nice work!

I started in italian 'cos I saw you're from Italy, and I grew up in Italy so just thought I would say something in italian :)
Multiductus
03-29-2009, 09:29 AM
Grazie!
It's nice to read my own language in this forum ;)

You're right about the textures in the background... good advice :)
...perhaps I will open up the file again and try to add some...
Anyway I find that the neatness of the ships isn't completely bad... it gives the piece an animated-cartoon-look to me!
giordi
03-29-2009, 12:38 PM
gia che ci siamo mi aggrego anche io!
it's a very nice work i love this kind of picture...how much time have you spent for it?
ruobing
03-30-2009, 07:14 AM
Very clean the screen
Multiductus
03-30-2009, 07:28 AM
Grazie Giordi :)

This illustration took me about 8 hours.
koansah
03-30-2009, 01:50 PM
Grazie!
It's nice to read my own language in this forum ;)

You're right about the textures in the background... good advice :)
...perhaps I will open up the file again and try to add some...
Anyway I find that the neatness of the ships isn't completely bad... it gives the piece an animated-cartoon-look to me!

aah ok. :) cmq, e' sempre un lavoro stupendo, anche se no vorresti cambiare + niente ;)
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