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lobo2
07-09-2003, 02:47 PM
hi
this is my last picture...
http://groupea5.free.fr/simon/finale.jpg
tell me what you think

Nick75
07-09-2003, 02:54 PM
:thumbsup: Great Job!

Zukum
07-09-2003, 03:07 PM
Excellent. Lots of character.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

beatabix
07-09-2003, 03:13 PM
the tall guy's left leg is interfering with the body of the short guy, creating a difficult to read silhouette.

i would reposition either the characters or the camera to improve the composition.

actually, on closer inspection, the tall guy is perfect, but the short guy doesn't fit too well. a better pose and composition on him would sort it out.

later
BEAT

huck
07-09-2003, 03:53 PM
Wonderful use of colour lobo2, your character development is well thought out as well as the subject matter. Excellent to see originality in your posting, …did you create this in a team environment or by yourself?

animatabull
07-09-2003, 04:04 PM
Great stuff!! Loads of character as was said.

Yeah, something needs to be done with the pose of the small guy, also to do with the fact he seems not to be looking at where don is pointing imo, rotate him a little anticlockwise.

Love their hands, great modelling.

Will you be animating the scene? It deserves coming to life.

lobo2
07-10-2003, 09:50 AM
thanks for comments and critics...

huck: i did it by myself

hwachai
07-10-2003, 09:54 AM
very nice character design!!!!

ceql
07-10-2003, 10:05 AM
Love the toony, stylised design, awesome! :applause:

davemcd
07-10-2003, 10:10 AM
thats going straight to the pool room......

I love the eyebrows on Don..... for some reason i think all of his emotions sit right there in this pic....wonderfull

though Sancho looks a little stoned

wheres the donkey ;)

DaveMcD

ThirdEye
07-10-2003, 10:13 AM
The colour scheme is fantastic and the characters have a strong personality, great pic! What software (and renderer) did you use?

MVP
07-10-2003, 10:17 AM
I can't believe I am actually saying this because I love this picture but the tall guys upper arm goes thru his shoulder thingy. Sorry for nit picking!! Fantastic though, would love to see an animation if you have one.

Odrakir
07-10-2003, 10:21 AM
Tall guy? short guy?

I thought it was obvious they were Don Quijote and Sancho Panza... Sorry, you all hurted my spanish pride:annoyed:

Great work man :applause:

Odrakir.

onlooker
07-10-2003, 10:22 AM
That looks great. I hope you meant your latest picture not your last picture. You have just arrived. It would be a shame to see you go so soon.
BTW, is that a Rob Zombie avatar? :buttrock:

genioloko
07-10-2003, 10:26 AM
:beer: Nice work guy!!! and very good lighting!!!!! Good tribute to Cervantes!!!!!!:D

Zhalktis
07-10-2003, 10:26 AM
Great color scheme! Great character! Great style! :thumbsup:

Simply an outstanding work, congrats. :)

ilasolomon
07-10-2003, 10:32 AM
EXCELENT! :applause: very stylish...

but the mills are in back, what he is pointig to?! ;) :p

Atwooki
07-10-2003, 10:34 AM
Beautifully designed and executed characters :applause: !!!

Q: Why do most of the more brilliant artworks, both 2D and 3D here (on this and other boards), reach such sublime heights?

A: Because the artists have been allowed to work from their own sketches and art-direct themselves, therefore maintaining the original character, simplicity and dynamism of the concept....
as is evident from this image!

- I only mention the above, because I noticed recently,in picking out what I consider to be the quality work for my 'reel, all but one piece had been part of a PPP (production pipeline)...

Atwooki

davemcd
07-10-2003, 10:36 AM
Originally posted by Odrakir
Tall guy? short guy?

I thought it was obvious they were Don Quijote and Sancho Panza... Sorry, you all hurted my spanish pride:annoyed:

Great work man :applause:

Odrakir.

yeah and considering the subject title was "Don Quixote" it seems like people would have know.... though i will fess up i couldnt remember Sanchos name properly...i had to go look it up :blush: .... i thought it was Pancho.....

DaveMcD

Soeren Nielsen
07-10-2003, 10:40 AM
really great piece of work man. I agree about the silhouette. So I made a quick image to show you what I mean.

Everything but the little guy reads well.. his right arm is covered by the silhouette of the hat, which i dont consider as big a problem as the way the leg of Don Quixote blends with him.

Hope you dont mind the paintover :)

siquier
07-10-2003, 10:48 AM
I am from "La Mancha" (Albacete/Spain) :)
Congratulations, good work!

ilasolomon
07-10-2003, 10:50 AM
BTW, is that a Rob Zombie avatar?

donno who's Rob Zombie, but that guy in that avatar is LOBO! a character created by Simon Bizley.

p4b10
07-10-2003, 11:02 AM
Hey man, i'd love to see Rocinante in that cartoon style!!!!

:lightbulb (Rocinante is Don Quijote's horse)

Great style :thumbsup:

morin
07-10-2003, 11:32 AM
:applause:

bumskee
07-10-2003, 11:40 AM
yeah this is excellent!
i am not a 3d guy so not sure how other guys would see it..but it truely looks awsome. very professional...!

:beer:

lobo2
07-10-2003, 11:46 AM
thanks everybody for your comments (and for the link...:surprised )
for the crits about the silhouette i agree
i've searched the best pose but...
for Rocinante i would like to do it but it will be later because i've started another picture project...
about my avatar it's Lobo by one of my favorite comic's artist simon Bisley :buttrock:

excuse me for my english

BeCOOL_MiN
07-10-2003, 11:49 AM
great job..

I think pretty good character design. I can see their personality or behavier.

Of course I know Don Quixote, though.

xavier-marquis
07-10-2003, 12:33 PM
Tout est excellent !

j'ai pas eu le temps de te le dire sur 3D station alors je me rattrape ici.

vraiment c de toute beauté

lobo2
07-10-2003, 01:07 PM
merci!!
venant de toi chuis flatté:)

Kel Solaar
07-10-2003, 01:29 PM
Great work on the design! The style is very cool :) I love the lighning and the color too :) Good job:thumbsup:

Frinsklen
07-10-2003, 01:56 PM
wow... excellent, I simply love the style, very well designed characters, amazing job!

As someone said, some shapes could be more readable, where Don Quijote's leg intersects Sancho. I would have also blurred the background a bit, just for the characters to be more readable too.

Excellent... :applause: any chance to see this animated? wires maybe? extra shots? .... just in case... :)

ThirdEye
07-10-2003, 02:11 PM
You still haven't told us what program you used :shrug:

Aearon
07-10-2003, 02:31 PM
great! :D very very stylish

i think the composition could use some work, the characters don't really stand out from the background

stipen
07-10-2003, 03:08 PM
J'adore !!!
C'est super sympa !!!
J'avais deja reperé le progress sur 3Dstation.
C'est mon premier post depuis longtemps sur ce forum, parce que j'en avait un peu marre de balancer de " AWESOME " et des "GREAT" mais là pour l'occasion je m'y remet !!!!
Super design et modelling.
:thumbsup:

ZVAN
07-10-2003, 03:14 PM
Very cartoonish, clean yet very characteristic! love the lights too! welldone! =):applause:

lobo2
07-10-2003, 03:23 PM
thanks again for your replies
Thirdeye: i used max 5
Frinsklen: i've blurred the background .... perhaps not enough:shrug:
and for other view and details here (http://www.3d-station.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4941&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0) 's the WIP on a french forum.....they helped me a lot
:thumbsup:
for an animation it will be later because i have to learn a lot of thing before....
stipen:c cool d'avoir l'avis de compatriotes:)
(ta petite anim de super heros me fait tjrs autant marrer)

CreatureseEtc
07-10-2003, 03:23 PM
ThirdEye_01 - You still haven't told us what program you used
That's true, which software did you use?
How much time did it take you to do this?
Can you post a wireframe version?

Cool job :thumbsup:

eoks
07-10-2003, 03:31 PM
oh!~
good work.^^

Scott Harris
07-10-2003, 03:44 PM
Awesome stuff! I really love the look.

I want to know some of the same things as the other guys... How long did this take you?

safakoner
07-10-2003, 04:11 PM
great job :thumbsup:

like Lorenzo Lamas & Antonia Banderas :)

MrBraun
07-10-2003, 04:28 PM
Great work!! :thumbsup:

DimitrisLiatsos
07-10-2003, 04:55 PM
One of my favourite stories and this is one of my favourite illustrations in 3d of this story...Cool Work :beer:

lobo2
07-10-2003, 05:32 PM
http://groupea5.free.fr/simon/design%20sancho2.jpg

http://groupea5.free.fr/simon/wire%20sancho.jpg

lobo2
07-10-2003, 05:34 PM
http://groupea5.free.fr/simon/wire%20don.jpg
http://groupea5.free.fr/simon/wirett.jpg

i hope i answer every request
this picture take me a long time ...i don't know exactly how much because i've done each element at different period..
thank you all again

Obi-one
07-10-2003, 06:10 PM
comme je te l'ai dit sur 3d station, je trouve ça excellent. :thumbsup:

j'avais pas souvenir des wires et des croquis.

Rhino169
07-10-2003, 06:35 PM
I love everything about this work!:applause:

Will there be any animations?
It is not too hard to imagine these characters getting to this pose and continuing on. I can even imagine them interacting with each other.

Very nice!:thumbsup:

Levitateme
07-10-2003, 06:54 PM
i really enjoy that pic as well, great style i agree, great atmosphere .

Ac0rN
07-10-2003, 07:22 PM
I love the style .. Very nice that there is no advance textures and it gets a relly cartoony look of it , lightning makes it all cool! :thumbsup:

-YoD-
07-10-2003, 08:21 PM
OUE ! beau travail lobo, j'aime vraiment les design de tes persos...et le rendu est vraiment cool. Well played ! :)

The-3D-Data-Labs-Guy
07-10-2003, 08:35 PM
Nice work! Will there be an animation in future? Hmm... It would be a nice one too. Wish u good luck man!:love:

Volker
07-10-2003, 09:08 PM
Awsome job, just one crit...

I think the tall guy's mustache should match his beard and shoes, curly and pointy.
That's it!
Let's see them move!!!

~Zach

DKScully
07-10-2003, 09:54 PM
Hi, I liked you pic a lot¡¡¡ Only two things.. (my opinion):

I'll make the grain of the windmill a little smaller...

I also make the sails a little more irregular... bended....

These are only opinions.. I hope you understanded my english...

phoenix
07-10-2003, 09:59 PM
dam nice render...................


:thumbsup:

dharmabum
07-10-2003, 10:42 PM
Hey, I really like this. I might be nice if there was more detail in Quixote's elbows. A few more polys or whatever for a nice crease right there. I might also make Quixote's arms and legs just a bit thicker. I think you want a real skinny guy but maybe widening the limbs just a BIT may be more appealling.

Just my crit. You can tell me to F-off if you like.:D

Travis
07-10-2003, 11:08 PM
Excellent. Sancho bears a remarkable likeness to Billy Bob Thornton!

:buttrock:

Prs-Phil
07-10-2003, 11:33 PM
Donny fighting Greek windmills ;) ... GREAT
The chars really have style.

I thought I would be frägged ;) when I saw your Ava. I´ve still got Lobo 1 to 23 then they stopped it here. Sad but true, that was quite a while ago.

Feanoro
07-11-2003, 12:45 AM
Awsome work man!

Reminds me of the new Monkey Island style.

Top marks!! :D :applause: :thumbsup:

DuRanG
07-11-2003, 01:00 AM
mando bem cris :applause:

chase311
07-11-2003, 05:06 AM
:buttrock:

Hookflash
07-11-2003, 05:43 AM
I love it. I like the cartoony look (imo, this is where cg really shines).

vitorvilela
07-11-2003, 06:49 AM
Awesome!!! Great job, great modeling, great light and a wonderfull stile congrats man :beer:

Take a look at this post,
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=65915
its nothing comparing to your work, except for the same inspiration ... hope u like it :rolleyes:

thanx and keep whith the great work!

C Ya

Vitor Vilela

Askhanir
07-11-2003, 07:48 AM
Excellent boulot pour cet excellent sujet !

Les personnages sont très sympathiques et s'implantent très bien dans le décor.

J'aime le côté très lumineux de la scène.

P.S. : Par ailleurs, j'adore Bisley ! ;)

long mao
07-11-2003, 08:12 AM
love the style.
good work!

Traiven3d
07-11-2003, 08:51 AM
Love the style/colours/characters. Reminds me a bit Monkey Island (the first one, it was the best).

Cheers!

muckymouse
07-11-2003, 12:23 PM
GREAT WORK! I love the boots...I wanna see more of your stuff. Did somebody say Monkey Island? I love that game! :)

=RUnyon

skyboy
07-11-2003, 01:08 PM
Great job~well done..like the way you using the colors:rolleyes:

VIVI
07-11-2003, 02:32 PM
yeah...
like it very much...!
i want to see more.

tauism
07-11-2003, 05:02 PM
sancho kind of looks like a simpsons character

like the imax 3d simpsons

PauloSampaio
07-11-2003, 05:03 PM
stile, great job and very stile :eek:

but I have a doubt:

the background is painted???

I asking this, because is middle strange , is blured...
but feel that is by stile, :p

well, great work, nice cartoon, nice pixar hehehe:thumbsup:


Contratulations

Bye

cgtalkmember
07-11-2003, 05:52 PM
very nice indeed, but sancho panza needs a bigger belly :beer:

Carbon
07-11-2003, 05:57 PM
Really Neat! Keep up the good work dude! :applause:

skidd
07-11-2003, 07:28 PM
Its so nice, nice style, congrats dude!

pence_all
07-11-2003, 08:34 PM
oh,it's very good job!

i like the model very much.

DoubleRaven
07-11-2003, 10:58 PM
Excelent job.
I agree tha Don Quijote looks awesome - a unique interpretation of the character. I like the faint suggestion of a mustach, and the whole attitude.

Sancho is pretty good, but his proportions are a bit odd. He is very skinny in parts. This could work, but would benefit from some figure drawing studies - maybe wider hips. He just doesn't yet embody the "down to earth" feel of the original character.

Overall, very cool.

greengold
07-12-2003, 04:28 AM
Like it, Like it, Like it !! Great modeling and coloring.
:applause: :applause: :applause:

sizzlebits
07-12-2003, 08:04 AM
Excellent. I love it. :drool:

p0lym0rph
07-12-2003, 10:27 AM
tres joli travail comme je te l'ai déjà dit,lost in la mancha!:applause: :thumbsup: :love:

eech55
07-12-2003, 06:55 PM
nice :annoyed: .. how can make one like this? :applause:

facial
07-15-2003, 03:46 AM
interesting work, :thumbsup:

olijosman
07-15-2003, 08:05 AM
I love the desing of the caracters, especially Don Quijote!! cool shapes!! mmmm....!!:applause: (En un lugar de la Mancha...)

souleage
07-15-2003, 08:56 AM
I like that style&background color....:)

Icestar
07-15-2003, 02:33 PM
oozing style, character and personally. luv it.

Sytron
07-15-2003, 03:45 PM
good work and very good style! this it is my new wallpaper :P

Jonatan [sytron]

lobo2
01-13-2004, 11:34 AM
http://groupea5.free.fr/simon/carte%20de%20voeux%202004b.jpg

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