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[CybrGfx]

Actually, she tells a hell of a lot without much effort at all. She conveys a simple beauty and joy that comes through without excessive detail and fussing.

Get rid of the white outline on the torso, sign this, and leave it alone. This is the best piece you have painted. Ever.
Exquisite light shining through the skirt fabric. Beatuiful facial expression captured with very little detail, lovely yet simple background.

You can't improve this one, it's your best.

~C

[q12]

Thank you very much mr CybrGfx.
Though i realy try to catch some details and improuve the realistic stile.
For me this is just a sketch make like i was in art-school. This image is boring because its like a low quality jpg and I want to improuve to the HD (high definition/rezolution) stile if I can say like this. This I search and hope to accomplish.Though, i will try to mentain some degree of touches used, from this first attempt.
I have "all" the background in respect of art teories and technics and I know how to use them from my modest experience.
But because im in a poor city I feel like a peasant who can "look but not touch" the greatest stiles and circles of real artists who can bring something new. But that is me. Its not a complain but a realist truth.
now...I am curious myself how i can bring this piece to the level 2.
god bless me.

[q12]

my hand it hurts like hell after some hours of intense concentration but I suppose it worth.
I work it at the handS and head + hair ... the rest is the same like before.
Its very HARD without a model...hmm but I suppose I like chalenges.
I have a inspiration position from a picture but there are WAY OTHER lights and THIS one of mine is the negative interpretation for THAT one, if I may say so.
This is my update :
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/q1212/cintiq-wacom/6tst-lumina11-000copy.jpg

[q12]

hy everybody
my first finished painting made entirely with my cintiq (my first done CG). hehe. finaly.
thanks for all your support bad and good.
I make this one from memory/imagination and a slight peak to a model here you can see it at this link:
http://img138.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=05198_neuner19_122_868lo.jpg&loc=loc868#

MY FINAAAL STAGE , VOILA :

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/q1212/cintiq-wacom/6tst-lumina11-0000copy.jpg

[CybrGfx]

She's much prettier than the photo.
Excellent effort on your part. Lovely results.

Congratulations, WELL done!

~C

[q12]

Thank you very much mr CybrGfx.
if can you think at something that can improuve this stile and in particulary this image then please tell me. I think that some textures at walls and ground will be fine but I want sugestions. thank you.

[CybrGfx]

Anything you add will call attention to itself.

Keep it simple, so the detailed things deserve the attention they get.

Let the viewer enjoy your painting, not labor to see details that add nothing to the "story."

~C

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