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jaucifer

07-09-2003, 04:21 AM

Hi there, this is my first work and I know it needs a lot of touching up. So feel free to give me your comments. Thanks.

Joel_Longie

07-09-2003, 05:42 AM

Nice work Jason, I like the detail that you used on the sword. The only critiques that I have is that the back of the scabbard is visible though the sword.

Keep going dude!

Joel

jaucifer

07-09-2003, 06:12 AM

thanx bro, right now I'm think of a background for it

jaucifer

07-10-2003, 07:23 AM

finally I have comleted my work.
http://www.ordix.com/sac/gallery/img-box/img20030710155723.jpg

jaucifer

07-10-2003, 11:44 AM

Aaaaaa guys......its really help if I can get some feedback from you all about my work, cause I can't figure out my mistakes on my own.

07-10-2003, 12:27 PM

I like ur way of drawing.Very plastica and precise.
The image in itself is good....but looks like it need more color.I know..is a matter of personal style...anyway...
I feel the needs to fill the image with more deep colors.....mmh sorry my english is very bad and i really cant express mysef at best......
And.....maybe it need one color dominace.....maybe...dark blue.
but...well done 4 sure.:applause:
keep it up....and go for more!

jaucifer

07-10-2003, 01:00 PM

thanks for the comment OZ really glad to hear that.
But I dun think I'm able to change the colour anymore, should I mistakenily overwrite my master file:annoyed:

Joel_Longie

07-10-2003, 03:00 PM

Looks good jaucifer, I like the muted colors. The only thing that looks like it needs more work is the depth of field. I really like the sky though.

SteveIacopetti

07-10-2003, 08:10 PM

Nice,I see what you did with the background and foreground.Cool idea.

-Steve-

phoenix

07-11-2003, 04:55 AM

skull needs a little clearity and thats it i think....u r going ifne...

:thumbsup:

jaucifer

07-11-2003, 10:22 AM

Tahnks for your comments, currently I now doing a new drawing, might be posying in a new thread soon.

pravinroche

07-18-2003, 06:58 PM

great work bro. but the sword going into the skull. 1) skull is small and after going into the skull the remaing of the sword is vanished the actual size of the sword is not seen here.

More over it Great Drawing.

jaucifer

07-19-2003, 02:35 AM

thanks pravinroche for the feedback. I will try to improve in it.

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