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YumYam
03-23-2009, 10:40 PM
Plop !

I'm new to this forum and more generally to the world of photoshop, the WIP here must be something like my 5 or 6th so as you can imagine I'm everything exept a pro and I do hope I'll be able to improve my skill here where I've already seen such a lot of amazing artists !

I've spent something like 15-20mon on it so it's still a very WIP squetch at the moment but as I'm new I assume it will take some time untill a kind modo valid this post so I'll be abble to do some progress ^^"

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2279/diviner.jpg
YumYam
03-25-2009, 12:42 AM
Really small update, I just worked a little on the flesh which turn out quite horribly IMO...I'm trying to correct that and to achieve a better render for the texture but I have some difficulties at the moment, maybe should I look after a photo as reference...

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/4158/divineandthepearlcopy1.jpg

Feel free to comment ^^
q12
03-25-2009, 03:13 AM
hello there
The anatomy is bad --- see about proportions and facial bones more closely. Im pointing at the nose/ lower lip/zygomat/gonion,and others.
But I presume this is a sketch and you will continue to make it better.
Im very curious what you will make about the background.
Elitha
03-26-2009, 07:36 AM
The neck seems a tad long. And the "v-muscle" (sorry, forgot what it's called) is too pronounced. It's ususally a lot more subtle, unless the person is in strain.
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