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clairebear182
03-23-2009, 08:32 PM
Just want to check the facial porportions are correct before I continue. Ignore eveything else since it's at a very messy state at the moment. So any c&c on the proportions of the face would be great. :) Thanks!

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/4996/wipq.jpg
http://yfrog.com/07wipqj
Sparreholm
03-23-2009, 09:01 PM
A really nice pose. Not really sure but perhaps you should do a few tests on the upper eyelid and cheekbone on her far side. Looking forward to see the next steps.

Regards,

Johan
clairebear182
03-23-2009, 09:09 PM
Thank you Sparreholm for your quick responce. I'm having a bit of trouble with her cheekbone, I will try my best to sort it. :D

Reworked nose, lips and forehead.

http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8585/wip2q.jpg
clairebear182
03-23-2009, 11:08 PM
Another WIP,last one for today. XD

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7827/wip4v.jpg
clairebear182
03-24-2009, 12:38 AM
one last wip for now!

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9031/wip5.jpg
Sparreholm
03-24-2009, 01:01 PM
Hello again Claire,

I think you lost something on the way. Her upper lip was, imo, better in the first WIP. In the last light-colored version the / \ thing (do not know the word) on her upper lip looks as if it is attached to far forward on her nose (instead of the base of the nose).

There is a lil conflict in in angle regarding the side of the face away from "me". Either, you should "pull back" her forehead or "I" should be able to see the cheekbone and some of her far-side eye.

Your coloring looks great so far and I think this will turn out a great picture.

Regards,

Johan
clairebear182
03-24-2009, 01:55 PM
Thank you! I see exactly what you mean and will try to fix it. :)
clairebear182
03-24-2009, 02:11 PM
Just made a few quicke changes with your points in mind. The changed version is on the right. I think it definately looks beter but something still seems not quite right.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6513/wip7.jpg
dowki
03-24-2009, 05:55 PM
her right cheek behind the nose has disappeared ! you had it in the first drafts-that looked good!
clairebear182
03-25-2009, 01:20 AM
Thanks, I still haven't got round to fixing it yet but I will tommorow. :D

'nother wip-

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2923/wip11.jpg
clairebear182
03-26-2009, 12:37 AM
still haven't got around to fixing the cheek yet. :argh:

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/7742/wip12.png
clairebear182
03-26-2009, 09:45 PM
Yet another update :)

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/7730/wip12.jpg
clairebear182
03-28-2009, 03:51 AM
Finished image is here. Thanks for your help. :)

http://meirou.deviantart.com/art/Rue-117320825
Sparreholm
03-28-2009, 10:57 AM
Can't see anything. The picture is not loading.

/Johan
clairebear182
03-28-2009, 11:01 AM
Ooops. Ironically, I didn't end up drawing the skull. :P Here it is :)

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3397/finktr.jpg
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