Critique me to death

[Inktvlek]

If we could see a bigger picture with more detail and maybe even different viewing angles, it would be possible to comment on it, but as it is now that's allmost impossible!!!

[DZL]

i need to see it to critique it.

don't be afraid - make the image bigga....

[roald]

Post a larger pic please :)

From what I can see now, the upper part of the head may be a bit too small/short.

And... if you are planning to animate the head using morph-targets, you should model it in a more neutral pose.


Otherwise it looks great!:thumbsup:

Could you post some wires too?


roald

[Benstomme]

here is the bigger version (i hope...)

http://images.deviantart.com/large/wallpaper/unfinished/Jakuuub.jpg

[Benstomme]

This is his natural pose, besides i dont know how morph targets work
bu' thanks for the crit :buttrock:

[Levitateme]

ben what program you using? that has weird bump maps, there is no soft bump there all hard, that is one thing i see with it.

[Inktvlek]

The bumpmap is a bit weird, that needs some work still, also what's that greenish 'glow'? At the bottom of his neck the colour looks strange. I think if you texture it, it'll look a lot better! (and the bump map!)

[klingspor]

He could also do with more wrinkles around the eyes, especially above the eyes you're missing a very prominent fold where the eyelids rest.
Another thing with the eyes: The red at the sides is too strong, should be more pinkish I'd think...

Other than that I like it, except for what the others have pointed out already...

[golem]

hell! did u use a planar projection? and maps? u cannot use at this rendering resolution a smaller map than 1500x1500!!!

try with cylindrical projection and unwrap in a 3000x1500 about, and if you want to use planar projection you must use blend or alpha channel texture (TGA 32bit) to smooth the transition between 2 textures.

morphing? what program? if max you have to modify a copy of the 1st head with poligonal tool (or whatever else, i dunno if it's poligonal, nurbs, patch, blabla...) and model in this way an "expression target". after apply a morpher modificator to the 1st head and put the 2nd in a channel. but i'm not sure at all if you're using max.
when you post be clear about tool, tecnique, etc.

golem

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