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roald
07-08-2003, 10:33 PM
Hi. I have just finished my first attempt on animating a human figure, and my first movie which is longer than 10 seconds.
I know that it looks a bit "under water" at the moment, but don`t know how to get rid of this look.

Here it is, Hole in One (http://colition.net/roald/HoleInOneXvid.avi)


Im also making a small homepage for the short. It is located here (http://home.no/rollol) (In Norwegian though)

http://home.no/rollol/web/benktest.jpg

C&C anyone? Please


Roald
:wavey:

Hellwolve
07-08-2003, 11:07 PM
I'd like to give the shot a shot, but it won't play for me...What codec did you use?

roald
07-08-2003, 11:14 PM
Hi!
It`s Xvid.

Here (http://home.online.no/~thoyerha/HoleInOne.avi) is a DivX-version :thumbsup:

roald

Hellwolve
07-08-2003, 11:27 PM
Originally posted by roald
Hi!
It`s Xvid.

Here (http://home.online.no/~thoyerha/HoleInOne.avi) is a DivX-version :thumbsup:

roald

Thanks, that work fine!

As for the models: I like 'em.

As for the animation: IMHO, pretty good, although a bit stiff at times, even for an old man ;)

Inktvlek
07-08-2003, 11:41 PM
Hehe, halfway through I thought, "aw that's sick!" but the ending was surprisingly good :)

I too think the animation is a bit too stiff... An old man may walk slowly, but he does "roll-off" his feet, right now they keep horizontal, which is a little odd. Try it, it's very hard! Now try to walk like an old man, and watch your front foot: your foot slowly rolls off!

Apart from that, pretty damn good for your first real movie! :thumbsup:

I would use a different kind of music though, because it's just too Pixar-like with that jazzy kind off music (in a bad way). They may inspire you, but try to develop your own style a bit more!

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