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Pitts
03-22-2009, 09:54 PM
Tossing up a few alchemy sketches. I prefer page 1.

Gate crasher is an abomination demon. Gorilla-ish in proportions and movement type. More or less a living battering ram.

Any feedback appreciated!

Latest update:

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/7404/update3p.jpg

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/258/updatec.jpg

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/6972/update4.jpg

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/4397/update3.jpg

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7886/78377585.jpg

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7264/77995526.jpg

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5447/84888269.jpg

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3830/65313539.jpg

Hexahedron
03-22-2009, 09:59 PM
I love the sketches. And the one I like the most would be A, It looks bestial.
Great job pal, keep it up.

MichelleJC
03-22-2009, 11:22 PM
I really like the design on H's chest, you should definitely incorporate that no matter what pose you pick. Really awesome work!

Pitts
03-23-2009, 07:17 AM
thanks hex, MichelleJC

update for the Gate Crasher...

still trying to develop the guy - dropped the dinky legs for more mass.

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/812/updatem.jpg

Pitts
03-24-2009, 04:29 AM
repainting this guys over and over. I like the silhouette, but it's just feeling less and less creative the more I look at it. I guess the third one is the closest thing I have to an abomination. might be time to wipe and start over.

any advise appreciated.

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/7283/update2.jpg

Pitts
03-24-2009, 07:09 AM
finally more abomination like...

I think i'm diging the black onyx nodes. probably hate them tomorrow. wooo.... :banghead:

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/4397/update3.jpg

OvidiusTiberius
03-24-2009, 02:21 PM
I think you should stick with this "nodes" idea,it has a quite original aspect, and is closely to black magic demoniac think or something.Nice concept anyway.

questionmarks
03-24-2009, 05:06 PM
love the latest update..especially the one with black 'eyes'...^^
but maybe dont take all the armors away???

NoChanc3
03-24-2009, 05:08 PM
Maybe to work the elements in, change some of the nodes to holes and have some fire spitting out, or have the fire burning underneath them, or a mix. Just some ideas.

Afterthought: You could make the nodes look like mini suns contained behind glass/crystal.

DarkBlueArt
03-24-2009, 05:35 PM
Hello

I like the last concepts very much. What I could imagine would be another pair of horns, as he need pretty much pure mass to crush through some gate. For the black or white orbs on his skin, there is so much that could be made... Eyes or bones are rather common, fire or crystals would remember me too much at diablo from blizzard (not that he is bad, but you should keep or own original style). Maybe some kind of black, nasty fluid spilling out there could look nice.

so long

Pitts
03-25-2009, 07:46 AM
thanks for the feedback guys,

OvidiusTiberius - totally agree about the black magic thing, tried to add some patterned scar/detail in the armor to push this (hellboy scars etc...). I'll have to make extra sure it conveys in the sculpt as the drawing doesn't really do the justice.

questionmarks - agree losing all the armor is rather boring. added some back but tried to incorporate a theme with it.

NoChanc3 - i love the idea, of something within the nodes, but really want these to convey like solid mass obsidian like hard points - blunt smashers.

DarkBlueArt - like the idea of black ooze, but i dont want this guy to feel mushy. I agree about more horns/mass up top. originally i wanted a whole mess of horns - like a thicket. it never came out well, however it might be something i experiment with in 3d.

Will probably make one more clean up pass - side and back drawing, but need to get into mesh soon.

for this evening a version of no armor and with. I prefer with.

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/6972/update4.jpg

requiem
03-25-2009, 08:17 AM
Very cool design. Love the Onyx. I'll keep an eye on this one.

QuantumPixel
03-25-2009, 09:16 AM
Looking really cool .. That is an awesome drawing style you have., I like the onyx with the shoulder pads the best.

nellement
03-25-2009, 11:52 AM
Thats great looking,kinda unique looking minotaur,I like the right one more,keep up interesting shapes

MartinNielsen
03-25-2009, 12:22 PM
Unique designs you have here :) I also think the one to the right looks best.

SebastianWunnicke
03-25-2009, 12:38 PM
I agree with the others, the right one with the shoulder armor is the best. I like it that you donīt try to make your abomination as disgusting as possible, like every one else. Because of the flowing forms your creature has a very own beauty.

Pitts
04-12-2009, 11:40 PM
early mesh update, I particularly like the horn thicket.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/258/updatec.jpg

Pitts
04-27-2009, 04:00 AM
update...

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/7404/update3p.jpg

Synectikos
04-27-2009, 05:35 AM
Awesome model, dude. I really like the swirl repetition. How are you gonna model that in under 10,000 poly?

nellement
04-27-2009, 10:55 AM
I like the tail design,try to pout those circluar designs from the tail,to put them on some joint areas maybe..just suggestion :)

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